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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
night has fallen shadows captivate moonlit skies silence is echoed thru their halls at night once upon a time emotion filled their hearts now jealousy and possessiveness controls the mind how can it be such a love once so dear now filled with sentiment of doubt and fear passion and romance they once shared hearts dancing a ballad that only they two bared thru the distance they are miles apart whispers of i luv u's echo thru their hearts if only the miles were shortened perhaps he would believe .. in his arms she yearns to be .. in his heart she found her destiny .. in his soul her life feels complete |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
night has fallen shadows captivate moonlit skies silence is echoed thru their halls at night once upon a time emotion filled their hearts now jealousy and possessiveness controls the mind A powerful poem, you captured the yearning for love perfectly. I hope that the fires rekindle. ------------------------ "Isn't it enough to see that a garden is beautiful without having to believe that there are fairies at the bottom of it too? " Douglas Adams. Small Black Flowers That Grow In The Sky "You have your very own number They dress your cage in its nature Once you roared now you just grunt lame Pace around pathetic pound games Wanna get out won't miss you sensaround To carry your own dead to swing your tyre tricks Wanna get out here you're bred dead quick For the outside, The small black flowers that grow in the sky They drag sticks along your walls Harvest your ovaries dead mothers crawl Here comes warden, Christ, temple, elder Environment not yours you see through it all Wanna get out won't miss you sensaround To carry your own dead to swing your tyre tricks Wanna get out here you're bred dead quick For the outside, The small black flowers that grow in the sky Here chewing your tail is joy" Richey Edwards |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"How can it be such a love once so dear now filled with sentiment of doubt and fear." Very nice and I think love has to be nourished. James |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Oh so true and so sad. I feel the lonliness and emptiness of a love that once was, but is no longer. Great expressive piece. I can relate on many levels. Keep up the good work!!  |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Lovely poem....I can relate..I love your last three lines.. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
this was very deep and beautiful! last three lines said it all! truly written from the heart and soul...the best kinds of poems! loved it! amy ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Your feedback truly warms my heart Thank you my friends CocoBaci |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
CocoBaci, this poem is beautiful - such powerful emotions -- so gracefully written ~netswan |
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lorilockheart Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 206Alabama |
Coco, How sad. I found myself desperately wanting to try and mend this relationship! Good job! Lori ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance. song by LeeAnn Womack ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Coco, indeed life is full of "if only's", if only they were "only's" Wonderful poem, filled with longing. . . touches the heart. . . ------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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