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Your Heart. . . |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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My love I know your heart I know it's ins and outs each and every part I know that beneath the pain Beats the heart of a woman wishing to live again I've known since we met love Since that day you came to me an angel from above You came, a heart to heal And I showed you a love a love so real Your heart my love I return For you and for your love I will always yearn Always my love will I see The gentle heart of a woman who longs to be free ---------------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Soft and sweet and loving. Corinne |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Romantic and devotional... Great work, Sven as always... Regards, Sudhir Life is like a painting, That in an art gallery is left hanging, Though many come just to look at it, A very few actually come to enjoy it. |
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lorilockheart Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 206Alabama |
I just love you Sven! You are such a romantic and a true gentleman. The lady in your life is so lucky. Lori ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance. song by LeeAnn Womack ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven~ Your tender heart exudes such romanticism - *sighs* of delight with every read. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
You simply are a jewel of a poet .. written so eloquently ..  Always a pleasure to read your verses CocoBaci |
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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
This is so sweet. Very touching and romantic. Lucky Lady. Lucky Sven. Good luck guys! Hang on gently! MBlue |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Sven~ Another wonderful poem! It was so beautiful. Keep up your wonderful writing "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying." Harry Anderson, "Night Court" *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Lately, your words never cease to amaze me. Wonderful writing Sven. Marina |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Sven,...you never cease to amaze me with your work...truly wonderful. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sven this is written with compassion and love. James |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
sven-- beautiful, simply beautiful! u wow me with your amazing ability to write with such passion and love! u go boy!! lol. in all seriousness this was very lovely. take care, amy ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
This was superb, Sven. Sweetness, romance, and a little sadness there all in one. I think this is one if your best, my friend. Excellent writing... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Wow, thank you all so much. . . You always amaze ME with the warmth and richness of all of your replies. . .I am truly honored to enjoyed by so wonderful a group. . . Thank you all again. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sven so romantic and tenderly written, I sigh as I read. Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Sing to me, Sveetie...I'll hum the parts I don't know...lovely, lovely, you...thanks. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
So beautiful Sven, what woman could resist? I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Tracie, serenity, and Isis... thank you my friends for your wonderful replies. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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