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Nan
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0 posted 2000-05-21 12:37 PM


Got Stuff that's here
Got stuff that's there
Got stuff I can't
Find anywhere

Got stuff in back
Got stuff in front
Got my stuff scattered
Everywhere

Got some stuff in
Got some stuff out
Got some stuff that
Is all about

Got stuff over
Got stuff under
Got Some stuff gone
All asunder

I think I need
A bigger space
To get my stuff
All in one place









[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 05-21-2000).]

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Denise
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1 posted 2000-05-21 12:46 PM


This is delightful, Nan!   But I think you would eventually find that the bigger space eventually shrinks because the STUFF keeps growing!....hehehe

Denise

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2 posted 2000-05-21 12:50 PM


Sounds just like my bedroom, which is very messy at the moment. LOL.   loved the poem and the Racoon. Does he play requests?



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3 posted 2000-05-21 12:52 PM


Nan~
Too cute !

Stuff-R-Me-Too

Not to be gruff
I'll call your bluff
Cause my stuff
is quite enuff !
Now I'll have to
Huff and Puff
To clear the air
of all this STUFF !
I can do it ...
I am TUFF !

*Picking and grinning*
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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ESP
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4 posted 2000-05-21 12:53 PM


Cool poem! Sounds like our house right now! Stuff certainly has a fast growth-rate!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

jwesley
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5 posted 2000-05-21 02:22 PM


Gee, Nan, that's "Stuff" even I can understand on the first try!

Wonderful, and my kids love it too. Speaking of kids, my son has 3 more days of the school year left, how about you? (He'll be a senior next year...where does the time go??)


jimmy

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6 posted 2000-05-21 04:53 PM


Hey! You did it!! What a great job!!

I haven't had time to write mine... been busy trying to figure out what to do with all this stuff of mine... i will though... hehe

loved it!
-d

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7 posted 2000-05-21 05:08 PM


Nan, Your just hot stuff and I love ya stuff
and all.

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8 posted 2000-05-21 05:18 PM


Im sure glad to know Im not the only one LOST in all my STUFF!!
creative poem NAN...cute graphics too.
jm

Nan
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9 posted 2000-05-21 06:25 PM


Thanks and all that stuff....

Denise - I think I'll stop feeding it then..  

Brian - Sorry about the raccoon... He retired after the first song - He said he was going on strike cuz I had too much stuff...  

Marge - I really do have Justine Uff...  

Lizzie - I'm gonna try turning my house inside out and shaking it..  

jwesley - What's this three days stuff??? I've got four weeks...  

Doreen - This is a record - I beat you to the punch...   ... I may never let you forget this one..  

Sy - You're HOT STUFF!!...

Janet Marie - I'm having Stuffed Peppers for dinner too...  ..  



OOPS..... He's BAAAAAAAACK!!!



[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 05-21-2000).]

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10 posted 2000-05-21 06:33 PM


Cute, Nan.    Sounds like you've got a lot of stuff to take care of.   When you get done with yours, come get mine.


 Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau"


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11 posted 2000-05-21 06:39 PM


Having just moved, I can definitely relate to this one!  Moved into a smaller house, pared STUFF down, but still have too much STUFF, and still need more and more and more STUFF!

Cute poem, Nan!

Corinne

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12 posted 2000-05-21 09:33 PM


Nan,

I think we all need a bigger place to put all our stuff we seem to accumulate without any effort!!  Very cute poem......love those 7-up spots of yours!!  

LW

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13 posted 2000-05-21 09:58 PM


ya know, no matter how many times we move to a bigger place it is never big enough. In a few short months we got so much stuff it's unbelievable...lol

 All my love,
Jeffrey

I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep



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14 posted 2000-05-21 11:19 PM


NUFF   of dat STUFF!
Nan
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15 posted 2000-05-22 07:34 AM


NUFF Said....Says deer.....  

Stuff yer own stuff somewhere, Temptress!!..  

Corinne - I just got a storage bin... It gives me another whole receptacle for stuff..  

Lone Wolf & Jeffrey - Thanks for stopping by.. I'm surprised you could see me through all this stuff

ROTFL.... I opened the forums this morning and the ad banner said "Good STUFF - Dirt Cheap".. or something like that...  



[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 05-22-2000).]

tracie66
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16 posted 2000-05-22 07:45 AM


A stuffy little poem and I'm stuffed from reading it.
...tee hee Lovley poem Nan   I feel abit like that too, darn stuff everywhere.
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



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17 posted 2000-05-22 08:18 AM


This sounds like my place.....Great stuff Nan!
Nan
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18 posted 2000-05-23 06:46 AM


Hey tracie & Eagle... for reading  and enjoying my stuff...
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