Open Poetry #7 |
Little Danielle |
Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
~ ~ ~ You were a dark molasses ice-cream cone! ~ ~ ~ Chocolate fudge baked warm and shiny; rounded and glossy as a perfectly waxed apple bouncing in and out of the tub. Two year old radiant princess twirling in giggles, with soap bubbles sticking to your silky brown sugar skin like fancy vanilla icing. ~ ~ ~ Slick and slippery, you leaped in and out, over the smooth edge landing in the water on your tummy laughing at the splashes. Eyes like chocolate-covered cherries with a sparkle in the center. Tiny pearls of teeth beaming! ~ ~ ~ We stood in the doorway; never mind the mess; just drinking in your joy! ~ ~ ~ Oh, Danielle, you were beautiful! A smile to keep forever. ~ ~ ~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Rosemary~ What a PERFECT reminder. I believe a child is most happy frolicking in water ... splishing - splashing You sure brought this to life, my friend. I could just see your heart smiling ! Love to you, Rosemary. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is such a wonderful tribute to her. Just precious! Denise |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Rosemary, I stand at the bathroom door with you and my heart is full of the joy that you have described, right down to the catch at the back of my throat. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Rosemary, this is indeed perfect and precious. there are few things that bring more joy than watching a child play and experience the innocence of that age. you have captured the essence of that perfectly, in this beautiful. THANK YOU for sharing this with me and for allowing my poem to bring back a memory for you. take care, janet marie Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme, They are not measured by the commitment of time. Some emotions run too deep to be described by words, Forgiveness and understanding-remain the most beautiful words ever heard. ~Janet Marie~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
I just wanted to let you know I've been here... are you still listening. All my love dale |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Yes, I'm here! Thank you, sweetheart! I really appreciate that! Love, your wife Rosemary |
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