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Lorraine Nisbet Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218Jersey City, NJ USA |
I awaken to the brightest sun I close my eyes waiting again to find the fun. The dream eludes me I can't find the path time to have coffee take a bath. All day I felt something on my mind elusive I can not find. Just when I realize it's coming back only seconds I'm taken aback. It's almost there I feel it for sure I had it for a moment I know it was pure. I awaken to the brightest sun I close my eyes wanting again to find the fun. etc, etc, etc. ~Lorraine~ |
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Ardonida Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 76 |
oy!! This was such a strange writing for me!! IT kinda makes you eager to hear what it is that you wait for, and then it ends as if you are bored waiting to remember!! I absolutely loved it! A. |
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Lorraine Nisbet Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218Jersey City, NJ USA |
No not bored. Trying to get back to sleep to recapture the dream. A sweet dream . I think? ~Lorraine~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lorraine~ 'The dream eludes me' (I just hate it when that happens) Welcome to Passion's wonderful family of poetic friends. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
WOW What an entrance you have made. Welcome to passions , i am sure you will love it here  All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Lorraine! Lovely poem! Please check you email for a special welcome! Denise |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Welcome to passions I have had dreams and awoke trying to remember them throughout the day, they seemed so real that the whole day was affected by the dream , great poem about this |
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Lorraine Nisbet Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218Jersey City, NJ USA |
Thank you all kindly for the warm welcomes. I'm meeting the most talented poets here and enjoying it immensely. ~Lorraine |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Excellent poem, those dreams are so hard to reach at times, most times I just give up on it. Welcome to Passions, I'm sure you will be loved here. |
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Lorraine Nisbet Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218Jersey City, NJ USA |
Hi, Lost Dreamer, Thank you for the welcome. I already know I love it here. ~Lorraine |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
A "WELCOME TO PASSIONS !!!" delayed by a few days... Hope that you enjoy your stay here...as much as we will reading more poetry from you... regards, sudhir Life is like a painting, That in an art gallery is left hanging, Though many come just to look at it, A very few actually come to enjoy it. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I would be sorry that I took you from your fun, waking you up and all, but for that, we wouldn't have had the delightful read! Welcome to Passions! Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
I can't tell you how many times I have awoken and forgotten my dream...grrr!! Great poem! Welcome to the Passions Family!! Love and hugs, Lizzie  PS Sorry I am so late in replying and telling you that it is great to have you with us! *she kicks her own butt*!! "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Lorraine Nisbet Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218Jersey City, NJ USA |
Hi sudhir, Thank you for reading my poem. ~Lorraine Hi Sunshine Thank you. I'm glad you were delighted. ~Lorraine Hi Lizzie, Thank you. Don't ya just hate that feeling, when you can't catch it. ~Lorraine PS No butt kicking allowed...lol |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Very Cool! I so much enjoyed this and I too have tried to recapture those dreams, it can be frustrating at times!  Very nice poem and Welcome to the Passions Family! ~Sheri |
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Lorraine Nisbet Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218Jersey City, NJ USA |
Sheri~ Thank you for the Welcome and the nice reply. ~Lorraine A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur |
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