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mariee66
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0 posted 2000-05-20 06:33 PM


As of this morning (5-27), The Blue Nitros are division champs!  Now everyone say WOOHOO!  


This little one is for my undefeated soccer team!  WOO HOO!!  Go Blue Nitros!  One more game to go...whew!


As wind we run swift
Faster, harder...to the goal
Shooting for triumph!





[This message has been edited by mariee66 (edited 05-27-2000).]

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1 posted 2000-05-20 07:47 PM


This is great, MArie! It takes a real sports enthusiast to understand this feeling. CONGRATS!!!!!!!!
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2 posted 2000-05-20 08:35 PM


GO BLUE NITROS !
Oh, yeah ... Mariee~
I love the soccer Haiku.
Wonderful 'play' of the emotions.
~*Marge*~


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mariee66
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3 posted 2000-05-20 11:53 PM


Balladeer~
Thanks!!!  

Marge~
Thank you, too!!!  

~~Marie~~

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4 posted 2000-05-20 11:58 PM


Great haiku Mariee, Good luck  



 All my love,
Jeffrey

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but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep



Denise
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5 posted 2000-05-21 10:55 AM


Congratulations, Marie! This is very nice!

Denise

mariee66
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6 posted 2000-05-21 10:33 PM


Jeffrey and Denise...Thanks much!  My guys are awesome, I feel lucky to coach them  

Marie~

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