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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Sable Scents ~*Marge Tindal*~ On sable scents of love's relent the echo is resound wafting on anguished breath of air a new love has been found Sent across night's canyon the wail of heart-in-aching found the breast of another in which to stir awakening The sable hue of broken heart has reached another soul this night boomeranging love my way as if by designing light On sable scents of love's relent screamed out to the sky found a heart to light within for another heard my plaintive cry On rush of breeze sent back to me refreshing love now stands within a heart now cradled in another's tender hands ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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LadySofia Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 238FL., USA |
Sensual and sad...wonderful verse! ^_^ ladySofia That time of year thou mayst in me behold, When yellow leaves, or none, or few, do hang, Upon those boughs which shake against the cold, Bare ruined choirs where late the sweet birds sang. In me thou see'st the twilight of such day, As after sunset fadeth in the west, Which by-and-by black night doth take away, Death's second self that seals up all in rest. In me thou see'st the glowing of such fire, That on the ashes of his youth doth lie, As the deathbed whereon it must expire, Consumed with that which it was nourished by. This thou perciev'st, which makes thy love more strong, To love that well which thou must leave ere long. William Shakespeare |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Another touching poem from the high princess of poetry! My score card reads "10" ~~very nice and uplifting~~ A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LadySofia~ Thanks for your thoughts. Danny~ Awwww ! You are a sweetie. Thank you, 'Judge' Holloway !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Marge,...you have such a beautiful heart and you express it so wonderfully. I enjoy all that you produce. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Oh, I like this..there is something wild in it...could that be you? Lovely writing!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SpitFire~ Your compliments are so sincerely written. You delight my senses. Thank you. Martie~ Oh, yeah ... WILD ... that's me ! ! !  Love you ... see you in the 'jungle of life'. ~*Jane*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I see im not the only one having too much caffeine LOL hey jane... this poem is excellent and flows like butter wonderful writing. later-junlge woman-gator LOL jm Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme, They are not measured by the commitment of time. Some emotions run too deep to be described by words, Forgiveness and understanding-remain the most beautiful words ever heard. ~Janet Marie~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Marge~ You have expressed this well my friend and I enjoyed the read of many mixed emotions stirred within this Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Loved It!!! All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep [This message has been edited by Jeffrey Carter (edited 05-21-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JanetMarie~ No such thing as too much caffeine at this house ! Thank you for enjoying this one. Tracie~ Thanks again, my little friend. Glad to have stirred you. Jeffrey~ I BELIEVE YOU ! Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Marge, that was wonderful "wafting on anguished breath of air a new love has been found" "Sent across night's canyon the wail of heart-in-aching" "boomeranging love my way as if by designing light" "On rush of breeze sent back to me refreshing love now stands within a heart now cradled in another's tender hands" magical images, I am gald that you turned a negative situation positive. ==================================== "Isn't it enough to see that a garden is beautiful without having to believe that there are fairies at the bottom of it too? " Douglas Adams |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very lovely, Marge! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BrianM~ Thank you for your thoughts. I'm always pleased to know that it touched you. Denise~ Just knowing you're out there is enough to brighten the day. Thank you, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Marge, I'm back! My email is playing up but when it is working again I will send you the email I wrote you as soon as I did get back! This poem is beautiful! I didn't find it sad, just immensely touching. Thank you for sharing your beautiful words with us. You really are queen of all poets! Love ya Marge! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lil' Lizzie~ Hey, little one .. tried to e-mail you TWICE this morning ...both came back ... so let me know when you're up and running. Thank you for popping in and for liking this, I agree ... not sad at all ... a glimmer of hope for all who are searching. Love you ... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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