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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
In the pain I am numb Even though I feel some sharp twinge going through my heart. They say you'll not recover they say you'll soon be gone But I know one thats higher that can make you well again I prayed for you this very second and I know he can bring you through I loved you then I love you now I won't give up he has the power to see you through. Why do people needlessly drive drunk? no thought of the other on the road when all you ever wanted was to help another You are the sunshine of the night You are the joy of the day So I know God can see you now and make you stay for those of us who need you for those of us that care for those of us that can't let go My tears flow like a river I can not make them dry You are my friend of all time My pain is so hard to share how much I really care. |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Rosebud, I know the pain of not understanding why things happen the way they do is very difficult to go through, but I believe that things happen for a reason. Even though we may not know the reason at the time and may never know the reason, God does. Glad to see that you have taken this to him. For he truly is one that can help. My prayers are with you. All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
God will give us understanding.  Nice poem you have here. Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau" |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
This is a tragic situation...hope the person recovers~~ This is very thoughtful and loving writing about someone that means much to you. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RoseBud~ Your friend has my prayers added to yours. Honey, it's tragic when one driving drunk causes so much pain. Believe me, I know. I lost my youngest brother to a drunk driver's heartless stupidity 20 years ago. I saw the life drain out of my mother at the loss. So sad our loss that still haunts me to this day. I would pray that your friend pulls through. Loving thoughts to you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Temptress, Danny and Marge, every day I just have to go on believing in a greater power. Thanks for you prayers. Marge thank you for sharing with me. I know it must be hard. I also understand from the perspective that my mother was an alcoholic died from it. To often drugs take over one lifes and in the process take others as well. |
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lorilockheart Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 206Alabama |
Rosebud, You have brought tears to my eyes. I think one of the hardest things in life is not understanding why things happen. It's a basic human instinct to ask why. I too believe that even though we may not understand, there is always a reason. I'll keep this in my thoughts and prayers. Lori ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance. song by LeeAnn Womack ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I am so sorry for your pain, Rosebud. Very tragic. You have expressed your pain and hope very well in your poem. Denise |
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Tom26 Junior Member
since 2000-05-07
Posts 30 |
rosebud, when i was reading this, i was getting misty. i can relate to that on so many levels. it helps to know others hare experiences with you -tom |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Thank you Tom , Denise, and Lori I know each and every day brings hope. The tragedy is that he was on his way to a call works with coast guard and got hit by drunk driver that came across median. So all I can do is have faith in the impossible. |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
I just wanted to let you know that my friend is still in hospital, but came out of coma but not talking yet. please keep him in your prayers. |
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