Open Poetry #7 |
Sparrow Tears |
jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
SPARROW TEARS She was just a muddy brown bird, who attracted no attention because she wasn't pretty and couldn't sing… but, my, she loved her nest of babies, high above the ground in the old Live Oak tree. When the storm came, it raged for days, reshaping the forest, tearing trees from the ground, until finally, on the last day of it's wrath, it tore the muddy brown sparrow's nest from the tree smashed it to the ground... killing all the babies she loved so dearly. The bird was so distraught it neither ate nor flew nor moved at all, for day after day until finally it did something, no bird had ever done before or since. It cried. Two days passed, and on the morning of the third there grew, from the spot where it's tears had fallen to the ground, a plant, one the world had never seen before. It grew tall, strong, green and vibrant, producing a bud, that swelled larger, and larger, until one morning just as the sun touched it's leaves, it bloomed... and the world was bathed in the elegance, of the first Rose. And ever since that morning the Rose has represented consumate undying Love, that springs eternal from the depths of the soul. W. James Beard, Jr. [This message has been edited by jwesley (edited 05-20-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JWesley~ Having read this - I would swear you must have known my grandmother ! We communed with nature at every chance - she always likened the tiny sparrow to the rose. 'His eye is on the sparrow' - and the budding of the rose shows us that He also loves beauty. How she loved both. Thank you for this tender render. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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LadySofia Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 238FL., USA |
I have never heard of the muddy brown sparrow and her babies bringing forth the first rosebud. Where did this come from so that I may ponder it? Unless 'twas you, for then I ask of you to tell me of your inspiration ^_^ LadySofia That time of year thou mayst in me behold, When yellow leaves, or none, or few, do hang, Upon those boughs which shake against the cold, Bare ruined choirs where late the sweet birds sang. In me thou see'st the twilight of such day, As after sunset fadeth in the west, Which by-and-by black night doth take away, Death's second self that seals up all in rest. In me thou see'st the glowing of such fire, That on the ashes of his youth doth lie, As the deathbed whereon it must expire, Consumed with that which it was nourished by. This thou perciev'st, which makes thy love more strong, To love that well which thou must leave ere long. William Shakespeare |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Thanks Marge, and actually you nailed one of the reasons for this piece. (By the way, I love all your work...you write beautifully.) Yes, it's my own idea (thought I'd start some gossip, ya know) and the idea arose from two different points...1 - the tiltle "Sparrow Tears") came to mind one day and I wanted to develop something around it. And 2- as Marge said "..his eye is on the sparrow" made me what to go in a direction that showed the sparrow as something special in His overall plan of things. Anyway, "Sparrow Tears" was the best I could do, so far...I hope it works. |
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