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Reflecting Love. . . |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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This is a challenge poem. . . to find out what kind of a challenge it is. . . go to the Poetry Challenge forum for details!!! Reflecting everywhere in love Her first passion is This desire of life His wonder is alive Very beautiful touching heart Beating with desired yearning Joining together in love This is love is this Love in together joining Yearning desired with beating Heart touching beautiful very Alive is wonder his Life of desire this Is passion first her Love in everywhere reflecting ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ < !signature--> That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 05-19-2000).] |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Challenge Beautifully met Sven, do you ever write a bad poem? LOL I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
*sigh* amazing....I read the challenge, then searched for the poem...you've done something that seems beyond me!!!  |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Just a minute while I put down my mirror.......OK, this was so cool! Every well done! Marina |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Great poem, Sven. Excellent idea for a challenge!! Will do my best to come up with something... LW |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Oh Sven, you write so amazingly lovely...(I believe serenity just cooed...) Sveetness all the vay.... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all. . . Isis, thank you, and yes, I have written some bad poems, just haven't posted them here! LOL deVine, I don't believe that this is beyond you, give it a try. . . Marina, I could hold that mirror for you. . .LOL. . .thank you for your reply. . . LW, thank you. . . I'm sure that you'll be able to come up with something. . . serenity, thank you so much. . . I believe that you're making me blush. . .  ------------------------------------------------------------ [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 05-19-2000).] |
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monique Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 369Louisiana |
Can i borrow your mirror I don't see nothing in mine i am so blind that i can't see the truth naked before my eyes it is so pure to be truly in love monique |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Finely crafted Sven. Jon |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
I was thinking of taking the challenge but then I realised I could never write one that was even a shadow of what you wrote. very clever, and also a great poem. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all. . . monique, take another look. . .you might need to polish that mirror. . . Jon, thank you very much my friend. . . brian, thank you, but I've just read your poem and it is very finely crafted on its own!! You did an excellent job. . . ----------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Sven AbSoLuTeLy AmAzInG  CocoBaci |
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