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Open Poetry #7

The Tie

Don Juan de Feu
Junior Member

since 1999-10-15

Posts 25

0 posted 2000-05-19 11:53 PM

            The Tie

They will not let me see her face,
tyrants, cruelty unsurpassed,
gehenna appears undefeated.
But, her voice they can't replace,
melodic crescendi long outlast
her passion, avowedly uncheated,

whose strains embue and never ebb,
alive, separate from the hearer.
Contentedly, if mounting years resign
the fates to spin the senile web,
I'd life defer, the future dearer,
her companionate tie in mind.

       --Don Juan de Feu

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

1 posted 2000-05-20 01:00 AM

Tight and dark, quite well done.

Corinne

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

2 posted 2000-05-21 11:02 AM

Contentedly, if mounting years resign
the fates to spin the senile web,
I'd life defer, the future dearer,
her companionate tie in mind.

Wow, dark and powerful images.
Well written.

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