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Necro Draconis
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0 posted 2000-05-19 08:28 PM


New Beginning

It is night
There is no wind
There are no stars
The world is motionless and dark
In front of me I hold a candle
Empty and lifeless it is
I light the candle
No longer is it lifeless
The candle dances in the night
Shining light on all that is near
The light engulfs the night air
Bringing all creatures together
Bringing light into this once dark world
Peace and tranquility fill the sky as a new life begins
In my hand I hold not just a candle, but a new life
The life that I hold is mine
The life that I choose is mine alone
The path that I follow, I follow alone
For life is like the candle
By itself it is lifeless and dark
But once enlightened, it brings peace and unity to a once empty world



 By Necro Draconis

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-05-20 06:37 AM


Necro~
What a wonderful thought.
New life as the candle is lit.
Beautifully done.
Welcome to Passion's.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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2 posted 2000-05-21 12:53 PM


Yes, welcome to passions indeed

Amazing poem you got there

 All my love,
Jeffrey

I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep



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