Open Poetry #7 |
You Save Me |
hippie_teen Junior Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 18Escondido, CA, USA |
I’m only fifteen years old, And my life’s already done. Uncle, I yield, I quit, I fold. I reach out for the gun. But then I see your face, And the tears that would be there. Putting you in that place, Is my ultimate fear. I could not bear the scorns, Of that much pain and guilt. Though my conscience still warns, Of these feelings that I’ve built. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Hey hip, this was a trip..... nicely penned. Your pretty smart for fifteen..... Parker |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
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