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hippie_teen
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since 2000-05-18
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Escondido, CA, USA

0 posted 2000-05-19 07:58 AM


I’m only fifteen years old,
And my life’s already done.
Uncle, I yield, I quit, I fold.
I reach out for the gun.

But then I see your face,
And the tears that would be there.
Putting you in that place,
Is my ultimate fear.

I could not bear the scorns,
Of that much pain and guilt.
Though my conscience still warns,
Of these feelings that I’ve built.


© Copyright 2000 Nathan Preston Langford - All Rights Reserved
Parker
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since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129
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1 posted 2000-05-20 02:00 AM


Hey hip, this was a trip..... nicely penned.
Your pretty smart for fifteen.....  

Parker

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
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2 posted 2000-05-21 11:50 PM


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