The Eve of Saint Valentine

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hippie_teen
Junior Member

since 2000-05-18

Posts 18
Escondido, CA, USA

0 posted 2000-05-18 07:57 PM

I wish I was a better man,
     With a sexy car,
and a killer tan.
     'Cause maybe things would be different than,
The way things, right now, are.

I wish I had a six-pack,
     And beautiful blue eyes.
A couple things, I'd rather lack.
     Truth is that I just don't stack
Up to those other guys.

But I'll always have that night,
     The night that you were mine.
That feeling at first sight,
     And in your eyes, the candle light.
The eve of Saint Valentine.

(Dedicated to Stacey)

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

1 posted 2000-05-18 08:08 PM

Hay Hippie,

This is so wonderful, I love it. I am so glad you posted it, does Stacy know it is about her? I can't wait to see more of your work and I am so glad you took me serious and checked this place out, you will love it here. I'll tell Stacy to read this she is going to be so red (RED) and I am going to tell her the hole world can see this (smile)

WELCOME TO PASSIONS,

Love, Cerenity

For anyone who does not know Stacy is my daughter

Ardonida
Member

since 2000-05-18

Posts 76

2 posted 2000-05-18 08:15 PM

This is soooo lovely!! I was off to bed, but I had to take a look into this flapping file on my screen! Well, I have this to say:
"I wish that you have all you ever wish for."
Ardonida/
Adri

hippie_teen
Junior Member

since 2000-05-18

Posts 18
Escondido, CA, USA

3 posted 2000-05-19 06:24 AM

Gosh, I hope my next poem gets a few more replies than this

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

4 posted 2000-05-19 12:39 PM

Hi Sweetie,

Don't worrie some times the forum is slow or you post at a odd time, but believe me the people in here are wonderful but also very busy as most have full lifes, they are out there. And remember what I said about posting to others work, this will prompt them to look for your work, and also you will get to know the other poets as well.
I have not been very active myself lately because of STUFF in my life and it happens to all of us at one time or another, but I see you have posted other poems as well and later I will stop and enjoy.

Love muches,
Cerenity

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

5 posted 2000-05-19 01:21 PM

Hey hippie_teen,

Firstly WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!!

Secondly, I wish I had read this earlier.

This is a lovely entry into the forum, mate, keep it up...Hope to see many more from you

Cheers,
Regards, Sudhir.

Life is like a painting,
That in an art gallery is left hanging,
Though many come just to look at it,
A very few actually come to enjoy it.

Angelwings
Member

since 1999-08-27

Posts 222
IL, USA

6 posted 2000-05-19 02:38 PM

Thanks, hippie teen, for sharing this poem with us. Welcome to passions. Often we feel we don't stack up to others but in the eyes of the one we love we are wonderful and stack over all others. If you love someone you love everything about them. Wonderful poetry keep it coming.

Parker
Member Elite

since 2000-01-06

Posts 3129
ON

7 posted 2000-05-19 04:21 PM

Hey Hip, this was amazing. I loved it. Great last verse.

Parker

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2000-05-19 04:37 PM

This is very beautiful..."That feeling at first sight" this is the beauty within that I seek my friend. James

hippie_teen
Junior Member

since 2000-05-18

Posts 18
Escondido, CA, USA

9 posted 2000-05-19 05:44 PM

I didn't mean to sound like I was whining, sorry! Thank you everyone for your kind words.

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