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Kellsue
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0 posted 2000-05-16 10:24 PM


RAINBOW

archway to the sky
vibrant and colorful slide
Heaven's covenant




 ~Kellsue

Reflect upon your present blessings-of which every man has many-not on your past misfortunes, of which all men have some. ~Charles Dickens

We make a living by what we get, but we make a life by what we give. ~Winston Churchill



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1 posted 2000-05-16 10:30 PM


KellSue~

I love it, I do
It quite simply becomes you
Shining rainbow hues

~*Marge*~


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Kellsue
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2 posted 2000-05-17 05:15 PM


Marge~

Oh thank you, thank you
I love expressive comments
with  poetic form

I'm glad you like it!  

Kelly


 ~Kellsue

Reflect upon your present blessings-of which every man has many-not on your past misfortunes, of which all men have some. ~Charles Dickens

We make a living by what we get, but we make a life by what we give. ~Winston Churchill



brian madden
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3 posted 2000-05-17 05:31 PM


I always look forward to your haiku's, and wow that was certaintly bright and cheerful, made me feel all happy inside.
Honeybee
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4 posted 2000-05-17 09:11 PM


I absolutely love haikus, and yours was a colourful addition!  You have mastered the haiku!  Please write some more for us  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee

Lone Wolf
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5 posted 2000-05-17 09:27 PM


Kelly,
Great hailu my friend!!  So bright and cheerful!!!  

LW

Denise
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6 posted 2000-05-17 11:45 PM


Beautiful, Kelly! I love it!  

Denise

Kellsue
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7 posted 2000-05-19 05:54 PM


Thank you everyone for your kind words!!

~Kelly


 ~Kellsue

Reflect upon your present blessings-of which every man has many-not on your past misfortunes, of which all men have some. ~Charles Dickens

We make a living by what we get, but we make a life by what we give. ~Winston Churchill



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