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Making Moments Memories
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Making Moments Memories |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Too many restless memories too many ways for me to go too many reasons to stay here too many seasons too much snow... Bask within. Bask again. (lovely, private, reverie...) A picture show, for me alone--- my satin memory... Keep me from my searching days. Save me from my lonely ways. (Bring me back--- bring back my song...) Take me back where I belong. Laughing, dancing, being free, making moments memories... *a little something written in the DAYTIME-lol* |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Keep me from my searching days. Save me from my lonely ways. (Bring me back--- bring back my song...) Take me back where I belong. Laughing, dancing, being free, making moments memories... ---------------- in the sunshine we shall play ... dance and sing till end of day then play again we shall, all nite.. by moon beam our poetry we write. You look divine in the sunshine me sweet!! love this poem of memories. me thinks me needs a nap...you too? LOL later sweet-gator jm |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Too many restless memories too many ways for me to go too many reasons to stay here decisions, it can be hard sometimes deciding which direction to take in life, but I think you will be ok in life as long as keep "Laughing, dancing, being free, making moments memories..." because that is how life is supposed to be lived, with a smile. loved this one alot. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Laughing, dancing, being free,....making moments memories.........fabulous!!! *Loved this. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderful serenity. . . Would that we could bottle all of those moments and drink of them whenever we chose. . . Excellent poem. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
This is beautiful, written with such longing, may you find all that you search for...you should write all hours of the day and night I think  Thank you so much for sharing this piece!!The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams ~Eleanor Roosevelt~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thank you m'friends, once again, and especially butterflies for the lovely ego boost! Sveetie Sven, and Janet Marie, as always, me grats. spitfire--thank you--and brian, sweet as ever....thanks... |
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BrazilianGirl Junior Member
since 2000-03-26
Posts 29 |
Beautiful!!! Very well written!!! I think I need some sleep too... almost 3 months of insomnia ... hehehe Loved your poem! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Serenity~ Loved this piece of yours very beautifully written. You have talent sweet one Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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