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I was wrong
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BrazilianGirl Junior Member
since 2000-03-26
Posts 29 |
Not a good one, but I thought I d share anyway Maybe I was wrong and we aren't meant to be Maybe I was wrong and you arent made for me Maybe I was wrong You never trusted me Maybe I was wrong You never wanted me Maybe I was wrong for letting myself think you loved me Maybe I was wrong for letting you desappoint me I know for sure I was wrong when I let you take over me I know I am wrong for still having you in me I might be wrong but I can't erase what you have done to me And I am not wrong when I say I wanna fight for you in every way! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Never wrong to express yourself brazilian girl--I could relate to this. Thanks for sharing it. |
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miriam Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 323glendale,ca. |
wait..i don't get it...he's wrong for you but you still wanna fight for him??? it's a great poem...and the only reason im asking to get that part cleared up is because im going through the same thing this very moment. I love the poem!! miriam coronado |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Great conveyance of emotions to text,...enjoyed the read...Take care. *Peace. |
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BrazilianGirl Junior Member
since 2000-03-26
Posts 29 |
i wrote that when I was really angry at my boyfriend, sometimes things go bad but if you know in your heart its worh fighting then FIGHT coz its better to regret fighting then just regret giving up  thanks for the replies |
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