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New Horizon - in response to Jeff's and lone wolf's challenge
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New Horizon - in response to Jeff's and lone wolf's challenge |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland 
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Through the gaps in my venetian blinds my hand slowly wipes off the dust of all past lives. I am gazing at eternal sky, and a dew drown meadow, to plant my spirit and bury the seeds of my sorrow. Hold myself naked before the mirror, the icy dew kisses my skin with a fresh tremor View my ideology proudly,vanity's the perfect sin. My agony dies to cultivate a beauty held within. Optimism in the waking hours of dawn, I feel alive since the first moment I was born. Purified in waters of a new horizon I am harmony, a sensitivity to celebrate on tongue. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Through the gaps in my venetian blinds my hand slowly wipes off the dust of all past lives. I am gazing at eternal sky, and a dew drown meadow, to plant my spirit and bury the seeds of my sorrow. ------------ View my ideology proudly,vanity's the perfect sin. My agony dies to cultivate a beauty held within. Optimism in the waking hours of dawn, I feel alive since the first moment I was born --------------- OH MAN... I dont even know how to respond to this. YOU went WAY deep for this. this is awesome brian, and so very cool. I was gonna try this challenge but there aint no way I can touch this. excellent writing... poet-genius-you are. later-bri-gator jm |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Brian, agree with JM, this is wonderful writing. Nice response to the challenge! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful Brian ... excellent response to the challenge ... I enjoyed this! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Brian, Challenge exceeded!! Wow!!! Powerful and deep thoughts emit from this piece. Just wonderful!!! Loved it!  LW |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Thanks guys for all your cooments, you are all too kind. It looks like my writers block is finally over, I just finished another poem today. Heh Janet, oh you are sure a kidder. I know that you could write something in your sleep that would overshadow my little poem, come on take on the challenge I know your positive attitude would suit the task perfectly, I had to watch barney the dinosuaur to be in a happy mood so I could write the poem. |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Wonderful meeting of the challenge, Brian --) netswan |
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