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BrazilianGirl Junior Member
since 2000-03-26
Posts 29 |
At night, I wanna relax, arrive at the beach see if the wind is still blowing And it is going to be good to feel the sand... I know I do it to forget I let the wave reach me and the wind takes it all away Now you are very far see, the line of the horizon drives my mind away from the dreams we dream together when we look at the same direction where are you now... besides of being inside myself We acted right just the time that wronged Its hard without ya coz you are in me all day long When I see the sea there is something in me that says we will be together some day Since you aint here what I can do is take care of myself I wanna be happy at least and dream of the day it ends I know, we are supposed to survive Look, fishes in the sea... I know i do it to forget I let the wave reach me and the wind takes everything away |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
very sentimental poem. nice expression. ~~good writing~~ A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
The ocean, the fish, the waves, and the wind, and beautiful thoughts for someone you care about. I enjoyed reading this. James |
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