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Angelwings Member
since 1999-08-27
Posts 222IL, USA 
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Colors cascading Emotions parading About in my crowded heart. Thoughts flowing Never knowing What is in store for me. Confusion neverending Heartache never mending A seemingly endless journey. Questions flying Deeply sighing No future plans are set. Helplessness surrounding My regrets bounding Any chances of peace. Smiles lost Loves cost a lifetime of memories. Colors casading Emotions parading Around in my crowded heart. \'''' *** ():~) ( *** /,,,, |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I'm sure we can all relate to this at one time or another. Very well expressed! Denise [This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 05-18-2000).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
My head is noisy this night too (this moon won't let me sleep) nice work for this restless night (or any other, for that matter) Bravo. |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Nice job, but what's up with you nicking my name ( not that I mind - your poetry is great and I don't mind if such a great poet follows me ) . Sorry about that hasstle - I just thought I'd ask . WELCOME to passions, I liked your poem very much and enjoyed reading it . L.of.L. Tom . Insanity is a perfectly normal responce to an abnormal world -R.D.Laing.- |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
I am very, very, very sorry oh master . It seems that I actualy nicked your name because your date of entry to the site was before mine ... oppps . Sorry again Tom . Insanity is a perfectly normal responce to an abnormal world -R.D.Laing.- |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Lovely poem -- sad netswan |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You've expressed your emotions well, with turmoil and confusion penned in such a heartfelt way Angelswings ... lovely poem. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Angelwings Member
since 1999-08-27
Posts 222IL, USA |
thank you all for your replies  and thank you angelswing i like your name as well  i also go under as Augchic711. But Angelwings is my pen name. Thank you for reading my poetry all No dream is impossible. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Colors cascading Emotions parading Thoughts flowing Never knowing Confusion neverending Heartache never mending Helplessness surrounding My regrets bounding Any chances of peace. Smiles lost Loves cost a lifetime of memories. fantastic images, I know what it is like to have constant turmoil but all great dramas and poetry are written out of conflict, great poem. |
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