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He Spirals Around The Gleam Of Light
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He Spirals Around The Gleam Of Light |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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He Spirals Around The Gleam Of Light He spirals around the gleam of light his image a blessing to my sight I sit beneath my breathless gaze my mind designing romantic maze. The floating stars twinkling my flight letting effervescence flow so bright halo around full moon spawns haze my level of thought begins to blaze. Music transcends deep into night my inspiration gathers delight dancing senses to a new phase sure too enlighten dawdling days. Energy reaching to dawns height wind blowing waves of whimsical fright his spiral image embossed in glaze forever implanted while dream strays. |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Wow! That was a great poem.  It gave me a great insight on dreams. "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying." Harry Anderson, "Night Court" *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful Gloria! I wish I could remember my dreams....rarely do...I just wished I dreamed like you, period!! Denise |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
i like the effervescence of this...  some well chosen words in here... enjoyed, gloria |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Dawn: Thank you very much, I appreciate your reading and responding. Denise: Thank you kindly, I appreciate your reading and replying. My imagination made this one up, kind of like day dreaming I guess. Doreen: Thank you, I am glad you enjoyed it, I appreciate your reading and responding. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
woowoo losty i liked this the flow was well done and it had lotsa prettiness to it ! |
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