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Acceptance Gate
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Acceptance Gate |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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Acceptance Gate My sinking breath my horrid song my rhapsody gone aimlessly wrong My baffled feet my folded arms my withered eyes hollow bitter charms My fired thoughts my frightened rage my objectives taunted in blind cage My stormy mind my half baked muse my emotions fight shorted out fuse My distant goals my wasted prize my empty flesh failing too disguise My hindered soul my lacking heart my prolonged fears piercing like a dart My confined self my empty plate my friendly ghost needs acceptance gate |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
Wow... this has some haunting phrases in here, Gloria... very interesting piece... it's very depressing, tho.. sounds like you are releasing some negative emotions which shouldn't be there to begin with.  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very good, Gloria. We all need and want that acceptance. Without it we somehow feel an incompleteness. You've expressed that very well in this! You do know how to turn a phrase!  Denise |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Doreen: Thank you for reading and responding, glad you found it interesting. I'd have to say you're very perceptive. Denise: Thanks for reading and enjoying. Feeling lost and alone from what used too be really does twist the heartstrings, and the mind. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I salute your twisted mind. Well done, dreamer |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
this is losty at her best exploring and exposing herself on paper i likes it alot |
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