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-My DreamWeaver-
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Holly Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 127Arkansas 
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~My DreamWeaver~ my dreamweaver is here everynight spinning all of my erotic dreams for me exploring every inch of each other longing for his touch my dreamweaver touches me in places no other has dared doing it with such passion and care he comes to me everynight bringing me all erotic dreams ever thought leaving my mind spint and my body wrought for my dreamweaver knows me like no other he's my friend and my lover HLB 2000 |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Great poem Holly! "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying." Harry Anderson, "Night Court" *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Holly~ I like this. I'm a fanatic collector of Dream Catchers and an easy touch for a 'Dream Weaver'.  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
very well done Holly... chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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bobbycat Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 233USA |
Wow....everyone should have a dreamweaver as this at least once in their lives....excellent poem. Christina =^..^= |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
*cue the song* "DreamWeaver. . .I believe you can get me through the night. . . " This is a great poem Holly, short and sweet. . . we should all have such wonderful dreams. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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MysticalNights Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 112Oklahoma |
Holly, Bravo! Great poem! I too have a "dream weaver" and after reading this, i can't wait to fall asleep.... |
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Holly Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 127Arkansas |
MysticalNights, Sometimes falling asleep is the only thing that keeps me sane. I know of those DreamWeavers..and mine never leaves me disappointed. Gotta love that in a person! LOL Thank you to all for you words of encouragement. I (as many of you I'm sure) am very critical of my own work, so it's nice to hear good things. SVEN-great idea about that song...I recall hearing that one when I was a child. Fits nicely.  -Holly |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful Holly! Made me want to hop back under the covers and start dreaming myself! Great verse! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
"My dreamweaver knows me like no other" liked the feel of this poem, so to speak. ~~nice writing~~ A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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