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Will the real Justin Kace kindly stop makin his own bubbles in the hot tub...by walt
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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But then my mind would have froze Cuz I just can’t seem to relate Anything plausible in prose So here is my weirdo story It happened two nights ago In another town far away The family reunion yuh know Sitting crowded in the hot tub Making intros to some strangers They’d been telling us wild stories Of their lives of mighty danger It was my turn to say my name To these loud and drunk vaqueros In response to "wayoutwalt" one said Something predicted in the tarots He said "if you are wayoutwalt Nice to meet you my names Justin" But when he said "that’s Justin Kace" My sides were really bustin I swelled with pride to think that he Compared me to ole Justin Kace But dear friends fantasy ends With coincidence on his face ok this is a true story when the guy said if your wayoutwalt then im justin...justin kace yuh he said if your wayoutwalt with such reverence that i thought wow he knows my works but yuh he was just bein silly guy o boo what was i gonna say so how do you like the sonnet versus the villanelle??? there was women present yuh know!! The doctor said, "You're almost dead. Don't eat green bananas no more." The sick little monkey groaned and said, "But that's what I 1-2 the 3-4." from The Monkey--Shel Silverstein |
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Justin Thyme Member
since 1999-09-13
Posts 216Oz |
You say you met my brother? Just soaking in in the suds? Somehow that don't suprise me... I'm glad that you're now Buds! I can't believe you met him! This thing is too bizarre! So if you see him once again, please tell him where we are. I mean, our personalities are taking up my mind... I'm so confused, I don't quite know what where or how I'll find... My brother, Justin Kace, you see, has been so lost in space he doesn't know where he has been or how he found that place! It is indeed a mystery how Kace met you last night. Somehow this story seems too true... I know it must be right!! signed, JT. that's me |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
ROFL Walt! Go figure, Justin Kase! You should have asked him if he's ever been to Passions. LOL I bet that was funny, and I'd have liked to see the look on your face when he said that  |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
LOL Walt -- hey, great poem -- I too would have liked to see the reverence on his face - -maybe you should have invited him to this place--) Cute Justin Thyme --) netswan |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Walt, How funny just imagine if someone had said they were Nurse Crachet...LOL I think you would be running then. Great poem I enjoyed your interesting adventure.  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
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Wow, talk about a coincidence, that would have freaked me out! Denise |
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