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Your Big Chance .......( revised )
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Your Big Chance .......( revised ) |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London 
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Your Big Chance ~~~ You ride the wind through space and time to search within subconscious mind You catch a wave from distant source within your cave receive its' force You fire a rocket of pondering thought from the depths of your knowledge before it's forgot ~ Your rocket explodes to magnificent sparks with a beacon of light alive in the dark Its' arrow streaks true and slices within to your naked soul bourn high on the wind Your big chance ... now or never ~ A deathly quiet envelopes the earth surrounds your essence ... til a pin can be heard You become the beacon ... your chance is now So tell the world what you've found ~ if you can put it in words ~ and make it quick they haven't got all day ~~~ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Oh, Rex, this is absolutely wonderful! You describe it well, and the last two lines are the cherry on top!  Denise |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Thankyou Denise ... I definitely spent a lot more time on this version than on the first Thanks again |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Rex, this is great writing. much wisdom in these words and yes, the ending lines sum it up with a ironic truth. tkae care, jm |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
WOOHOOO! I love it, I love it, I love it! Did I say I loved it? This was fabulouso! <*\\\>< Our background and circumstances may have influenced who we are, but we are responsible for who we become. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Janet Marie ... quite often we can't seem to spit out the right words and our thoughts go misunderstood ... especially talking to duct cleaners on the phone WhtDove ... WOOHOOO! thankyou ...you know how to bring a smile |
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