Open Poetry #7 |
What Fluff's Their Feather's |
Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
What Fluff's Their Feather's What fluffs their feather's out of place making them think they have a case? All holy, thou, and mighty all in one run away ego child go have some fun. Glorifying another ground I'm not familiar mine is plenty fine and usually not far. Take the mind games to your maker I refuse to bow down and be your faker. Last I knew I was human flesh with a heart and surprising enough I might even be smart. Can you walk all over me like I'm buried dirt grinding your feet harder and harder to hurt? I exist front and center not below your feet open up those eyes before you're in defeat. I can cast finality before this day is done as you choose to blow away the setting sun. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LostDreamer~ Feel better? Whew ... this one should clear the air. Hon, e-mail me if I can help you feel better. I'm pretty good at that pick-me-up stuff ! Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
Damn, Gloria? What fluffed your feathers???? Geesh... you certainly told THEM! Nicely said... remind me to ask you to help me verbalize when i get angry with someone... LOL Enjoyed! |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
*tiptoe out of here PdV* Great poem!!! Very good imagery here!!! You tell 'em! |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
hehe, well done Lost Dreamer I dont think I wanna be the person to whom this is directed to |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
ONE....TWO.....THREE...HE'S OUTTA THERE.... Nice slam....whoa..... Alicat the Persnikitty |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Marge: yes I think I am feeling better since now I read this and start laughing at myself. Thanks for your kindness. Doreen: Glad you enjoyed it, what type of people usually ruffle feather's?...LOL Sharon:Thank You, no need to tiptoe I'm giggly now Mistikman:LOL I wouldn't want to be him either lucky it was in writing and he never heard a word of it. Thanks for reading Ali:LOL, amazing what the written word can do, thanks for reading glad you enjoyed. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Shew...feathers flying all over the place! Their not ruffeled anymore...I think they are now indian feathers....ready for a war dance!hehe |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Romantic Heart: LOL, I love it indian feathers ready to do a war dance. Thanks for reading a making me laugh |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
*quietly closes the door before Lost Dreamer gets a chance to see here, once outside and safe again, sighs deeply* geesh...glad I'm not on the recieving end of that one |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
great writing....the emotions come through like gang busters .....hope today sees you with a smile |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Whew! That's some steam you blew off here, Gloria! I'd like to shove this in my sister-in-law's face....ooops......did I say that? That's okay, I don't think she knows how to read.....LOL.....I know, I know, I'm being bad, but sometimes it just feels sooooo good, ya know? Denise I've must have missed this one when my server went out for two days....boy I have alot of catching up to do around here! [This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 05-13-2000).] |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Ruth: LOL, nobody ended up on the receiving end of this one, I got it out of my system through the poem. Thanks for reading and replying I appreciate. Corazon: Thank you, I appreciate your reading, replying, and compliment. Denise: I have a Sister-in-law like that too, but I would not waste my breath on her...LOL Thank you for reading and replying, I appreciate. |
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