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Lost Dreamer
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0 posted 2000-04-16 06:54 PM


What Fluff's Their Feather's

What fluffs their feather's out of place
making them think they have a case?
All holy, thou, and mighty all in one
run away ego child go have some fun.
Glorifying another ground I'm not familiar
mine is plenty fine and usually not far.
Take the mind games to your maker
I refuse to bow down and be your faker.
Last I knew I was human flesh with a heart
and surprising enough I might even be smart.
Can you walk all over me like I'm buried dirt
grinding your feet harder and harder to hurt?
I exist front and center not below your feet
open up those eyes before you're in defeat.
I can cast finality before this day is done
as you choose to blow away the setting sun.



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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-04-16 07:20 PM


LostDreamer~
Feel better?
Whew ... this one should clear the air.
Hon, e-mail me if I can help you feel
better.  I'm pretty good at that
pick-me-up stuff !  
Love ya'
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com



doreen peri
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2 posted 2000-04-16 07:50 PM


Damn, Gloria? What fluffed your feathers???? Geesh... you certainly told THEM!

Nicely said... remind me to ask you to help me verbalize when i get angry with someone... LOL

Enjoyed!

Poet deVine
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3 posted 2000-04-16 09:39 PM


*tiptoe out of here PdV*

Great poem!!! Very good imagery here!!! You tell 'em!  

Mistikman
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4 posted 2000-04-16 09:49 PM


hehe, well done Lost Dreamer   I dont think I wanna be the person to whom this is directed to  
Alicat
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5 posted 2000-04-16 09:54 PM


ONE....TWO.....THREE...HE'S OUTTA THERE....


Nice slam....whoa.....


Alicat the Persnikitty

Lost Dreamer
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6 posted 2000-04-17 12:38 PM


Marge: yes I think I am feeling better since now I read this and start laughing at myself. Thanks for your kindness.

Doreen: Glad you enjoyed it, what type of people usually ruffle feather's?...LOL

Sharon:Thank You, no need to tiptoe I'm giggly now  

Mistikman:LOL I wouldn't want to be him either lucky it was in writing and he never heard a word of it. Thanks for reading  

Ali:LOL, amazing what the written word can do, thanks for reading glad you enjoyed.  

A Romantic Heart
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7 posted 2000-04-17 12:56 PM


Shew...feathers flying all over the place! Their not ruffeled anymore...I think they are now indian feathers....ready for a war dance!hehe

 


Lost Dreamer
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8 posted 2000-04-17 08:47 AM


Romantic Heart: LOL, I love it indian feathers ready to do a war dance. Thanks for reading a making me laugh  
hoot_owl_rn
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9 posted 2000-04-18 09:55 AM


*quietly closes the door before Lost Dreamer gets a chance to see here, once outside and safe again, sighs deeply* geesh...glad I'm not on the recieving end of that one  
Corazon
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10 posted 2000-04-18 09:58 AM


great writing....the emotions come through like gang busters .....hope today sees you with a smile  
Denise
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11 posted 2000-05-13 03:11 PM


Whew! That's some steam you blew off here, Gloria! I'd like to shove this in my sister-in-law's face....ooops......did I say that? That's okay, I don't think she knows how to read.....LOL.....I know, I know, I'm being bad, but sometimes it just feels sooooo good, ya know?  

Denise

I've must have missed this one when my server went out for two days....boy I have alot of catching up to do around here!

[This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 05-13-2000).]

Lost Dreamer
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12 posted 2000-05-17 11:41 AM


Ruth: LOL, nobody ended up on the receiving end of this one, I got it out of my system through the poem. Thanks for reading and replying I appreciate.  

Corazon: Thank you, I appreciate your reading, replying, and compliment.  

Denise: I have a Sister-in-law like that too, but I would not waste my breath on her...LOL Thank you for reading and replying, I appreciate.  

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