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The Final Destination
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The Final Destination |
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Wobbly Head Bob Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299Virginia, USA |
Deep inside is where I hide I'm hiding from the information Wanna get out know what its about but I've lost the inspiration Here again with you my friend We're gonna get a confirmation Of the deed follow my lead I'm looking for the constellation Looking for we gotta find more And work on the calibration Walking through and I'll follow you Theres gonna be a celebration On the phone we're not alone Better watch the punctuation On the ear you know they'll hear Have to keep up with conversation Oh too soon out on the moon We're missing the gravitation Hear him speak my heart got weak We've made the final destination |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I see some real talent here, Wobbly... hehe... good name... You've made your point and used a very difficult device quite adeptly... Internal rhyme is pretty difficult to pull off with the consistency I see in your work... Keep 'em coming Wob....  |
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