{Lone Wolf and jeffreys challenge}

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Open Poetry #7

{Lone Wolf and jeffreys challenge}

fool
Member

since 2000-02-07

Posts 61

0 posted 2000-05-15 07:51 AM

I've split the sky
with violent action
seen reactions
ever clear.

You and I are never quiet
always moving through the nightlight
always watching with delight
though theres sadness
its not ours.

We mirror dreams
and seamless patterns,
make the nightmares
not so dark.

Although the morning
brings us change
we keep cold lightening
and rearrange.

You've kissed me once
and dawn came calling,
I never stopped falling
into you.

New horizon
colors ambient
loves so frequent
when I hold you.
We dance naked
in the sunrise
all the world
is our surprise.

netswan
Senior Member

since 2000-03-28

Posts 1369
Washington

1 posted 2000-05-15 07:57 AM

This is splendid, Fool -
challenge well met ---)

I Like it -- especially the last line.

netswan

Jeffrey Carter

Member Elite

since 2000-04-08

Posts 2367
State of constant confusion!

2 posted 2000-05-15 06:11 PM

Challenge Extremely well met m'friend

New horizon
colors ambient
loves so frequent
when I hold you.
We dance naked
in the sunrise
all the world
is our surprise.

That last line is amazing

All my love,
Jeffrey

I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2000-05-15 08:45 PM

You have a great job in meeting our challenge!!! I have to agree with , Jeffrey...the last line is incredible!!

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