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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2000-05-15 08:06 AM



Horizon's Of The Heart
~*Marge Tindal*~

On the horizon
a new sun rising
bring light to my day

On butterfly wing
I flit to those things
I softly make my way

On web's endless fun
so delicately spun
I weave my way to you

On horizons new
I have found you
My life has just begun





 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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netswan
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1 posted 2000-05-15 08:09 AM


Marge this is lovely ----)
so sweet

netswan

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2 posted 2000-05-15 08:45 AM


Oh Marge, this is wonderful! Gee, I just love all of your poetry so much...thank you for the pleasure of reading it!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

Corinne
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3 posted 2000-05-15 11:18 AM


simply beautiful, Marge!

Corinne

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4 posted 2000-05-15 12:17 PM


Marge~
    This is very lovely.   I am happy to say that you made my day.  Thank you.

 Trust Instinct. Instinct will keep an animal alive, but Logic can kill a man.

Richard "Rickey" N. Boydstun, Jr.

Denise
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5 posted 2000-05-15 02:35 PM


Such a beautiful horizon, Marge! Very lovely! I enjoyed the view!  

Denise

Beki
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6 posted 2000-05-15 02:37 PM


very sweet and tender  
Martie
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7 posted 2000-05-15 04:21 PM


Marge, so nice to see the new day with the possitive look to whatloveing things will become distinct in the sun...Lovely poem!
Honeybee
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8 posted 2000-05-15 04:48 PM


~Marge~

A sweet and positive poem, just like you are!  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee

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9 posted 2000-05-15 06:14 PM


Very sweet Marge....as always.

chris

 Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.



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10 posted 2000-05-15 06:44 PM


Marge, If this was a responce to the challenge you far exceeded it....Great read m'friend

All my love,
Jeffrey

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but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep


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11 posted 2000-05-15 06:47 PM


Marge,
I love this.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
On horizons new
I have found you
My life has just begun
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I jump at every poem that has your name beside it.  You are truly a pro.

Lori



 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance.
song by LeeAnn Womack
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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12 posted 2000-05-15 07:33 PM


Marge: You're so romantic, I hope he realises how lucky he is....sigh!!!...*g*...lucky devil!

HUSG

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13 posted 2000-05-15 07:49 PM


Marge,
I agree with Jeffrey here, you far exceeeded our challenge.  Great poem!!!!  So full of hope...
LW


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--Michael W. Smith

Marge Tindal
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14 posted 2000-05-15 08:52 PM


NetSwan~
Thank you, hon.

Lil' Lizzie~
You are such a delight in my life !  

Corinne~
Thank you, my friend.

Rickey~
Awwww!  I glad if I made your day ...
cause you've just made mine !  

Denise~
I loved sharing the view with you.

Beki~
Thank you.

Martie~
The sun brings each day ... born anew.
Thank you, my friend.

Melissa~
I'm positively a positive person !  

ChrisG~
Thank you, my friend.

Jeffrey~
It was and I thank you.

Lori~
What a nice thing to say.
Thank you so much.

RainbowGirl~
Ahhhh ... but it's my 'lucky' too !

LoneWolf~
Thanks to you both for the inspiration.
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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15 posted 2000-05-16 02:27 AM


Marge, great poem.  I wish I can one day write to your calibar.  Thank you for your encouragement on my first post.

Vphantom

The face is a mirror of the mind but the eyes confess the secrets of the heart.  
St. Jerome

Marge Tindal
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16 posted 2000-05-16 08:17 AM


VPhantom~
Stars above ... what a beautiful thing for you to say.  I just might be *blushing*
Hon, I just let my thoughts flow freely from my heart ... that's all that really counts.
It just truly amazes me that others see the beauty in my thoughts.
Thank you so much.
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Severn
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17 posted 2000-05-16 09:59 AM


Marge(y) - why is it you never run out of things to say? Really beautiful things?

LOL - just don't ever ok?

Hugs
K

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