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Flutter-Bye (For Elizabeth Santos)
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Flutter-Bye (For Elizabeth Santos) |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Flutter-Bye ~*Marge Tindal*~ If upon the wing of butterfly you should happen to flutter by I'd lead you to a rosy view to keep in the crimson heart of you If upon that petal you should sit I'd watch with rapt delight as the rainbow arch settled over you and covered you until night Then upon elfin wing I'd softly sing my song so all the world would realize you were where you surely belong On crimson petal of the rose you'd sleep in endless dream to meet the morning sunrise with love of endless seem ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Dear Marge What a wonderful fantasy you have portrayed here  Liz will love this. Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ Thank you, hon. Elizabeth inspired it with her 'On Wing Of Butterfly'. She's something else ... she is ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is wonderfully written by a remarkable poet to another remarkable poet! I just know Liz'll love this one. I know that I could never not love what you write! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Marge, This may have been inspired by "On Wing of Butterfly", but it came directly from your heart. And I thank you for this honor. You can't imagine how much it means to have such a lovely poem written to me. Thank you, dear friend Love Liz |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lil' Lizzie~ Here I am ... surrounded by 'Lizzie's .. lucky me ! Thank you sweetie. Lizzie Lady~ You KNOW it means a lot to me to be inspired by you. You are pretty special to this heart. And, yes I do know ... Love you~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 Marge* It's a wonderful feeling to be inspired by another...this is so beautiful just like the souls of the two women involved |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yes, very beautiful, Marge! Enchanting! Denise |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Yep, This one is a keeper... I think I'll steal a line or so OK... Naw, I takin' the whole thing... HA! If I could paint a portrait, of this life in which I've led, and somehow sketch a story, of the visions in my head, I'd start out with a canvas, stretched tightly in a frame, and in the bottom corner, I'd leave room to sign my name. (Michelle A. Bartley) |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge, this has got to be one of my favorites, it is done so well with such sweet love for such wonderful person. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ButterfliesDC~ Thank you so much. Guess you could call us 'soul' sisters ! Denise~ I do thank you. Elizabeth does give 'enchanting' inspiration. Lucky~ I am so glad that you like it. ze_keeper has spoken ! Martie~ Shucks, it just flew to the page in a heartbeat after I read Elizabeth's 'On Wing Of Butterfly' ... She's still my little 'quipping' partner. And God, how I love her. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Marge, what a beautiful vision you have given me! Thank you for sharing it. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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bobbycat Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 233USA |
Lovely, Marge. What a delightful portrait you have paiinted upon this canvas. Christina =^..^= |
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CSwtThng Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 124 |
This poem sounds as though it came straight out of dream. Beautifully done. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Margi-girl, this is PERFECT, one of my favs by you. and inspiration that comes from reading a poem by another...thats the true gift of this special place and of poetry. wonderful imagery here! jm |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
simply put i love this |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoveBug~ Thank you, sweetheart. BobbyCat~ I appreciate your thoughts. SweetThing~ 'A dream is a wish your heart makes' I would wish beautiful inspiration like this for everyone. Thank you. JanetMarie~ I'm inspired each day by someone else's thoughts ... Elizabeth is easy-inspiration. Thank you. Walt~ Simply put - thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Lovely |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hoot~ Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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