Open Poetry #7 |
~*No Words Great Enough For You*~ |
Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
~*NO WORDS GREAT ENOUGH FOR YOU*~ If I held a dictionary upside down, and shook the words free as if emptying a drawer, and all of those perfect words lay at my disposal, it would be impossible to find words with such eloquence or grace to tell you how much of an honour it is to be your daughter and how much I admire you, respect, adore, and love you, Mom By Melissa Honeybee |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Melissa* What a lovely gift to your mother, she is lucky to have a daughter like you to tell her how special she is to you!! The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams ~Eleanor Roosevelt~ |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Fantastic! Love the design...love the thoughts... really wonderful... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Melissa...perhaps it is I that should be taking lessons from you Lovely sentiments to match the lovely poem |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is breathtaking, Melissa! Any mother would be thrilled to get this from their child! Denise |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Melissa, There really is no better way to say "I love you, Mom!" I know that she is thrilled with this poem. Great work! I love the thought in this one! ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Melissa this is lovely...I like the way you use the dictionary...it works for you very well. James |
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lorilockheart Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 206Alabama |
Melissa, what a great way to explain exactly how there aren't enough words. This is one of my favorites - it's printing right now. Lori ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance. song by LeeAnn Womack ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Melissa - this is worth being a card, no doubt about it! Excellent poetry -- excellent simile YOU have a lucky mom! netswan |
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epoet Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 291grand rapid,MI, usa |
lovely poem. sentimental feelings well portrayed. good work |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melissa~ You just *hugged* your mom in a big way !!! I'm smiling ... this is WONDERFUL ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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