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Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

0 posted 2000-05-12 05:19 PM

This piece came out of my first notebook of poems. I hope y'll enjoy it!

Baby, kiss me one more time
because, I love it when your lips touch mine.
Baby, kiss me one more time,
to reassure me that you're exclusively mine.
Baby, please kiss me one more time
because your kiss,
is too hard to resist.
Never before, have I found a girl who's kiss,
left me breathless.
Never before, have I found a girl who's kiss,
left me helpless.
Never before, have I found a girl who's kiss,
could hypnotize me
as well as mesmorize me.
Her kiss could instantly
lift my soul out of my body.
Her kiss is like magic
and I got to have it.
Her kiss is so powerful that without it,
life wouldn't be the same
because, I would go totally insane.

Nathan

REBECCA ALLYN
Member

since 2000-05-09

Posts 91
Lima,Ohio

1 posted 2000-05-12 05:21 PM

~Hey,Nate~
Really good work I really like this poem
keep them I up!!

LOTS of LUV,
Becky

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2000-05-12 05:31 PM

Lovely and descriptive thoughts Nate. I too enjoy a good kiss...reminds me of my old friend Cappy VanBuskirk...when we kissed her lips melted into mine...a fusing of the lips... it was totally supernatural..
ha....ha.....James

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

3 posted 2000-05-12 05:47 PM

Thank you Rebecca for your lovely comments
and thank you James for your wonderful comments.

Nathan

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

4 posted 2000-05-12 08:06 PM

Sounds like quite a kiss!

Denise

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2000-05-13 04:47 AM

Nate, my friend~
Sounds magical to me !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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netswan
Senior Member

since 2000-03-28

Posts 1369
Washington

6 posted 2000-05-13 07:34 AM

Hi Nate ----wow such a lot of thoughts
on kissing -- well written poem

netswan

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

7 posted 2000-05-16 06:00 PM

Thank you Denise, Marge, and netswan for your lovely comments!

Nathan

Holly
Member

since 2000-05-12

Posts 127
Arkansas

8 posted 2000-05-16 07:54 PM

Nate,
Now that's a KISS! I have had very few kisses like that myself, but man, I'm willing to read more about yours! Great work!!

-Holly

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