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Slashed soul
Member

since 2000-03-29

Posts 86
England

0 posted 2000-05-14 02:10 PM

Hour glass figure to die for,
she counts the seconds down, relentlessly.
complexion so clear, and faultless,
she moves inside, golden and fine.
I can turn her upside down, and she never complains,
just sits there silently, doing what she does best.

.....eggtimers are not all the same....

-Rich- (lol)

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

1 posted 2000-05-14 02:15 PM

~Ppffttt...LOL....very clever of you. Great post.

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

2 posted 2000-05-14 02:19 PM

Hour glass figure to die for,
she counts the seconds down, relentlessly.
complexion so clear, and faultless,
she moves inside, golden and fine.
I can turn her upside down, and she never complains,
just sits there silently, doing what she does best.

.....eggtimers are not all the same....

I would like to express how much I loved this poem but I can think of are a string over used words but believe me I mean them,
great poem, intense, stunning images,
every line is sharp and powerful. Brilliantly written.

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