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CMGrimm
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 685
USA

0 posted 2000-05-13 04:13 PM

Until I Can Have You

I didn't mean for this to happen
I didn't mean to fall in love
But when I look into your eyes
I see an angel from above

I never meant to let you get to me
I never meant to take the fall
But when you look at me and smile
I know you'll see me through it all

I never wanted to feel my heart break
I never wanted to feel this blue
But I'll just have to live with this
Until the day that I have you.

chris

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.

netswan
Senior Member

since 2000-03-28

Posts 1369
Washington

1 posted 2000-05-13 04:30 PM

Hi Chris -----chin up!
Lovely poem -- though, sad.

netswan

CMGrimm
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 685
USA

2 posted 2000-05-14 07:19 AM

Thanks netswan.

chris

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2000-05-14 08:09 AM

Nicely said Chris ... I hope she reciprocates!

Best wishes,
/Kit

CMGrimm
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 685
USA

4 posted 2000-05-14 09:17 AM

Thanks kit...

chris

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

5 posted 2000-05-14 10:40 AM

~Chris,...hey there, this poem is lovely...sad message, but beautifully written. *Hope all goes your way soon.

lorilockheart
Member

since 2000-05-06

Posts 206
Alabama

6 posted 2000-05-14 10:35 PM

I really liked this one!
Sad, yet so pretty.
Lori

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I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance.
song by LeeAnn Womack
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Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2000-05-15 06:56 AM

ChrisG~
Stirring emotions.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Danny Holloway
Member Elite

since 2000-01-15

Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK

8 posted 2000-05-15 10:29 AM

So quick it seems that a happy heart can become a broken heart...no explaining it seems.
~~nice writing~~

A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.

CMGrimm
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 685
USA

9 posted 2000-05-15 02:54 PM

Thanks all of you..

chris

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

10 posted 2000-05-15 06:08 PM

Nice writing.I liked your poem very much.This is what I feel right now.

sonjes
Senior Member

since 2000-02-18

Posts 564
North Carolina

11 posted 2000-05-16 06:23 AM

Your verse says it all...from falling to breaking to hope. That is hope I see at the end of the tunnel isn't it?
Eloquent words Chris. Stated simply but beautifully. A message that knows no boundaries.

Don't care what people say
Just follow your own way
Don't give up and use the chance
To return to innocence.
-Enigma

CMGrimm
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 685
USA

12 posted 2000-05-16 10:48 PM

Thanks vandana and sonjes...
it means alot that people still read me...lol

chris

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.

tulip
Member

since 1999-07-04

Posts 320
unknown

13 posted 2000-05-17 01:26 AM

I'm sorry you're going through it. I know the feeling all too well, I happen to be feeling the exact same thing. We just have to keep facing forward, and take things one step at a time!

MysticalNights
Member

since 2000-05-17

Posts 112
Oklahoma

14 posted 2000-05-17 04:17 AM

Great poem Chris. I know exactly how you feel.....

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

15 posted 2000-05-17 07:14 AM

Chris~
Touching poem, may all your wishes eventually come true

Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

16 posted 2000-05-17 07:37 AM

These words struck a very tender chord
Thank you for this one
It's lovely
Liz

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

17 posted 2000-05-17 08:11 AM

"I never wanted to feel my heart break
I never wanted to feel this blue
But I'll just have to live with this
Until the day that I have you."
This is exactly the way I feel about Lena. James

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

18 posted 2000-05-17 01:22 PM

Oh Chris...truly romantic. Nice to see you posting from time to time

CMGrimm
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 685
USA

19 posted 2000-05-21 09:31 PM

Thanks everyone...

and Ruth I only post to see YOUR responses..lol..j/k.

I don't get to post or respond as often as I'd like but I get in as often as I can.

chris

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.

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