Open Poetry #7 |
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I’ll Never Forget |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho ![]() |
[This message has been edited by Rosemary J. Gwaltney (edited 05-17-2000).] |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is so picturesque and flowing Rosemary ... beautiful images, and wonderfully written! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
A world without Rosemary My mind can't concieve A day without Rosemary My heart wouldn't believe A garden without Rosemary God wouldn't leave Love Liz |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Rosemary~ This was a wonderful read ![]() Thanks for sharing. Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Brandyn Sand Member
since 2000-04-21
Posts 82Columbia, SC |
Lovely comparisons, Rosemary. The images you painted here left a lasting imprint on my mind. *applause* ![]() |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Rosemary~ The very idea of it .... 'A canyon without any echo' ... brings your thoughts to life. Are we not blessed by the things another brings to our hearts ? *You are courting a magical muse. And it becomes you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"The goodbyes have turned into hello's"...enjoyed reading this Rosemary..."a tear never able to fall"...every single line of rhyme. James |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Rosemary...I may have to be the initiating member of your first fan club as I so love your work ![]() |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Rosemary--this is gorgeous...someone is singing it as I read...and Ruth, I'm in her fan club already!! |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Nice writing!!!!! ![]() |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Oh Rosemary, how do you do it? This is brilliant and absolute charm! ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
The first time ever I saw your face I thought the sun rose in your eyes And the moon and the stars were the gifts you gave To the night and the empty skies my love To the night and the empty skies [No I shant forget my love] If I could paint a portrait, of this life in which I've led, and somehow sketch a story, of the visions in my head, I'd start out with a canvas, stretched tightly in a frame, and in the bottom corner, I'd leave room to sign my name. (Michelle A. Bartley) |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
~ ~ ~ Kit McCallum - Your comments are so beautiful! Elizabeth Santos - You are so dear - your heart is so sweet. tracie66 - I truly appreciate your comments - letting me know that it flows well. Thanks for appreciating the imagery! Brandyn Sand - It is lovely to think I have left images painted in your mind! Wow! Marge - your appreciation is always treasured. I love how you said I am “courting a magical muse”! jmlee12345 - Thank you for letting me know what you enjoyed. I keep every comment, you know! hoot-owl-rn - Oh, Ruth, you are so dear! I’m so glad you love my work. I love yours too! Martie - Many times we hear the same song in the wind ... (thanks for your comments!) vandana - thank you! Meadowmuse - your comments are enchanting! Thank you! lucky - oh, my darling husband - I cherish your love for me more than I can ever tell. Thank you all! Sorry it took me so long to reply - life’s been kind of frazzled for a few days! But I appreciate every single comment, and always will! The spiritual wind that holds survivors aloft, plants the seeds from which bloom new hope ... R.J.G. |
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Crystal Lynn Junior Member
since 2000-05-21
Posts 18Miami, FL. USA |
im new to poetry and your poem left me in awe..it was beautiful ![]() |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Rosemary,...now this is truly beautiful poetry. Your words amaze me...*sigh*,..I look up to you and your strength,...your wisdom of seeing things in a different light,...a deeper meaning. *Peace. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
you always write with such an elequence and grace. i truly admire your gift! i liked this poem very much...it painted such a vivid picture that i could see. i am so happy that you have a love in your life such as this...makes life so much better!! take care amy ![]() beautiful poetry as always! ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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