navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #7 » Longing for Summer
Open Poetry #7
Post A Reply Post New Topic Longing for Summer Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Rosebud1229
Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina

0 posted 2000-05-13 01:05 PM


As Spring fades into Summer,
my minds seems to ponder,
how often things seem to be
more fasinating, more clearer,
awaking all my senses.
The days more beautiful,
The colors more bright.
Tree's more erect and standing tall.
Oceans more clear blue in my view.
The warm breeze more softer on my skin.
The air flows, dances easily through my hair.
It makes me appreciate all the gifts I oft forsake.
To feel, to see, to taste, to hear, to love,
How many times Have I often squandered such beauty before me.
Every once in awhile though I am reminded when Spring fades into Summer.
< !signature-->

 

[This message has been edited by Rosebud1229 (edited 05-15-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 Rose - All Rights Reserved
brian madden
Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
1 posted 2000-05-13 01:19 PM


Yes the summer is upon us, hopefully it will be nice weather though Irish summers can be very unpredictable. It is great to see nature in full bloom, the way you described the images of nature I don't think that you have "squandered such beauty" in fact you captured it perfectly.
lorilockheart
Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 206
Alabama
2 posted 2000-05-14 08:46 PM


I couldn't have expressed my own feelings any better.  How I love summer and all the feelings it brings!  How insignificant we are when we really stop and think.

Beautiful.
Lori

 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance.
song by LeeAnn Womack
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #7 » Longing for Summer

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary