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Midnight Tranquility
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Midnight Tranquility |
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soulfulpoet Junior Member
since 2000-04-14
Posts 42ontario, canada |
The sky is mirky blue tonight, the stars are bright yellow. A few strands of white whisp across this blanket of beauty I'm entangled in. It's midnight, the lake is placid and calm. The sky reflects onto the water almost perfectly. I'm sitting on the dock, wrapped in a towel. My swimsuit is blue and orange but still visible in the dark night. I love the nighttime; so calm, quiet, peaceful. My friends are at the campfire, no one seems to notice my lack of presence. But even though I'm alone, I'm not lonely. Now the water that rushes against my body, is my companion. [This message has been edited by soulfulpoet (edited 05-13-2000).] |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
soulful this is really great! Such peaceful imagery here. "Alone but not Lonely" "Night is my Companion" "I love Night Time" netswan |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
That was beautiful, I am not the best person with coming up with titles but I think a title with the word "tranquillity" would really suit the atmosphere of the poem, maybe "midnight tranquillity". |
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soulfulpoet Junior Member
since 2000-04-14
Posts 42ontario, canada |
thanks for the replie  midnight tranquility is perfect!!! thank you so much. |
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Kellsue Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 210Waukesha, WI USA |
Beautiful poem...as for a title? Well I like Netswan's "Night is my Companion" or Brian's "Midnight Tranquillity" or how about "Dark Serenity"... What ever you name it, the words are wonderful! ~Kelly  ~Kellsue Reflect upon your present blessings-of which every man has many-not on your past misfortunes, of which all men have some. ~Charles Dickens We make a living by what we get, but we make a life by what we give. ~Winston Churchill |
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Kellsue Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 210Waukesha, WI USA |
Ah..you sneaked in while I was replying! Wonderful choice for a title.....  ~Kelly ~Kellsue Reflect upon your present blessings-of which every man has many-not on your past misfortunes, of which all men have some. ~Charles Dickens We make a living by what we get, but we make a life by what we give. ~Winston Churchill |
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