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The Artist and The Poet
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The Artist and The Poet |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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The Artist and The Poet Brilliant reds and Indigo blues Yellows remain vibrant hues splashes of color or finest line discussion heard among the wine. Colors forward, forth, in my face frantic the artist in his haste to leave his mood before he departs his lifeblood becomes his art. ~~~ In room dusty, books shelved long thoughts lay hidden but for a hand to remove and lift cover from life between the sheets to be explored on demand Here to be read into force the poet's attempt to impart color to the blind, in voice rich with timbre, to impart feelings heard with the thrust of tongue, speak the written word. ~~~ ©KRJ 13 May 2000 Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
This is lovely, and such a great comparison. netswan |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You've captured my two greatest loves Sunshine ... the paintbrush and the pen have always been my "releases" in life. What a wonderful comparison, I understood this well ... Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
netswan, comparisons do us well... Kit, lucky you to be multi-talented... thank you both... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sunshine~ Remarkable talent on display. You were waltzing the muse of many last evening ! Stirred this poetess/artist heart ... yeah, ya' did ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
You certainly painted a beautiful picture, you are a true artiste. If you can call animation an art and me a poet then I guess I am both an artist and a poet. For me when I write I think visually which would explain why my poems are often descriptive rather than atmospheric and emotional. [This message has been edited by brian madden (edited 05-13-2000).] |
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REBECCA ALLYN Member
since 2000-05-09
Posts 91Lima,Ohio |
Such talent you have!!! great work I love the comparisons!!! LUCKY you!! LOTS of LUV, Becky |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Sunshine!  Denise |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Excellent Sunshine!! Now, if I could only get a pen that paints, I'd be in business!! Speaks to the way that writing and art go hand in hand. . .as poets, I feel that we do indeed "paint" with our words, you have caputred this well. . . Wonderful my friend. . . --------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
As artist and poet (well somewhat poet) I can only say sweet this poem of yours. Your words are so well chosen. I enjoyed it very much The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
You've painted this canvas well, Sun .... Simply beautiful .... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Your usual wonderful. *L* |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sunshine, This is wonderful!! I think you have 'painted' a beautiful picture here for us all. Thank you for sharing!! Excellent writing, Sun. LW |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you all very much for your comments...this one liked me, too. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
How did I miss this one???? Great stuff as usual... The poet's muse, turns up true blues, The artist's brush, Could even paint a crush. Gifted is the artist, the gift is to the art, Works of a poet, Brings words to a thought. ------ I am delighted by this one, sunshine... Warm Regards, Sudhir Life is like a painting, That in an art gallery is left hanging, Though many come just to look at it, A very few actually come to enjoy it. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your additions are always remarkable, thank you, Sudhir... |
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