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ashen Junior Member
since 2000-04-25
Posts 13 |
Numbness Within i'm drowning in a lake of uncryable tears i wish things to remove the guilt i bear if all my heart wanted was to be loved why can't it give that emotion in return? like the walls of jerusalem, i am numb within the guilt of love, is my cross for sin the hole in the hand, the strangers apart i wish i wasn't scared, i wish i had a heart. |
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soulfulpoet Junior Member
since 2000-04-14
Posts 42ontario, canada |
that was a beautiful poem. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
It is alright to be scared and you just proved you have a heart, otherwise how could you express something so tender and beautiful. "like the walls of jerusalem, i am numb within the guilt of love, is my cross for sin" excellent image, thanks for sharing. I don't believe that you are numb within, in your words I can feel emotions bubbling and swirling I look forward to reading more of your poetry. |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Ah Ashen - you have a heart ----) wonderful little poem - and a great way to work out indecisions netswan |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You do have a lovely heart Ashen, and it's crying out it's words beautifully on paper. Nice work ... Best wishes, /Kit |
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