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Dance with me
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Dance with me |
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Stargazer Junior Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 16Alvordton, OH USA |
Whispering kisses to you I wonder if you can feel their thoughts diamond sharp in the point of my view they make my heart bleed with the want to answer the drum that I know echoes in your chest my feet to slow to grace it's tune I let the blood throb in my head and envision pulses in my eyes and though my mind aches my heart leaps gracefully and cries in passion (for once there are no words to describe joy) my dreams sway to the beat thump-thumping through my conciousness I remember only fragments but your signature is embedded in each memory and has been for longer then my soul will admit stand with me now and teach my the steps of love and hold me when I stumble Stargazer "I wish they would only take me as I am." -Vincent Van Gogh |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
That may possibly be the intoxicating feeling of love, I really enjoyed reading this poem. some great images here, "I wonder if you can feel their thoughts diamond sharp in the point of my view" "they make my heart bleed with the want to answer the drum" "but your signature is embedded in each memory" |
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