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***nightingale |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
what happened to you out there? they really hurt you didn't they? i need to see you cry so i can mother you. i need to see you bleed so i can smother you. you really got burned, didn't you? your fingers crudly bandaged. come. lay down beside me. i'll take you away. when you wounds have healed and your soul returned, we will run. run to places we have only ever dreamed about before we will run together. < !signature--> I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. [This message has been edited by mete out (edited 05-11-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Together....it doesn't get any better than that! Very lovely poem. Denise |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Nice soul-stirring punch word... regards from a soul-seeker, sudhir. Take each day as it comes, Consider each day as a flight, Try hard to succeed and fly, Surely then you will reach some height. But if by some chance you don’t, Remember that tomorrow will always come. Learn this well and learn this hard That today’s efforts will pay for tomorrow’s fun. A Crazy Monster, a.k.a Ski |
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infinat3 sadn3ss Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 85somerset england |
hiya, i am so happy you feel so much together , ive read this and told you why i like it before so i cant think of anything to say sorry i probably excited you by making you think it was a decent reply see you soon love always cabes |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
***dsnyder, thankyou. you are right, it's the best! ***Sudhir Iyer, your words are greatfully received. thankyou. ***cabes, thankyou so much sweetheart. your replies are always so looked forward to by me. you daft thing. i love you cabey! we all do! don't sell yourself short honey. lou xxx I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. |
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Thinker New Member
since 2000-03-06
Posts 8 |
This is beautiful baby.. Ill take away all your fear baby.. you can just huddle up in me anytime.. Ill always be here for you just like your here for me. I love you with all my heart. Your going to do just fine in life, infact your gonna do great. You are truely amazing and every day you prove that. Dont you worry about anything anymore because as long as were together nothing can touch us. Yer baby! ************ THe THinkEr To think is a right To know is to be too sure of your own exsistance |
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PericolosoAmore Junior Member
since 2000-04-14
Posts 31 |
Lovely poem, togetherness is a wonderful fealing. |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
***Babee, i don't know where you came from, but i love you so much! thankyou os much for all your words and kindness and for sharing your wosdom with me. all my love, booboo xxx ***PericolosoAmore, thankyou for your reply, you are right, i am very lucky.  I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
***Babee, i don't know where you came from, but i love you so much! thankyou os much for all your words and kindness and for sharing your wosdom with me. all my love, booboo xxx ***PericolosoAmore, thankyou for your reply, you are right, i am very lucky. I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
could anyone suggest a title? i feel it needs one... I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. |
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infinat3 sadn3ss Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 85somerset england |
how about "nightingale" or "plaster caster" ??????? freedom is the right to say 2 + 2 = 4 |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Together is a lovely word to end a lovely poem! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
***cabey, i like nightinggale, really subtle...i'll bear that very much in mind.  ***esp, thankyou for this, it's nice to know that others can share some of my happiness in this one... I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
this ones for you cabes.. check the title. thats what you get for being the best mate a girl could ever have! I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"When your wounds have healed..and your soul returns..we will run" very lovely thoughts come to my mind as I read this. Makes me think about the healing that is in a new relationship. James |
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rene Member
since 2000-04-24
Posts 113 |
we will run away that is one of the best descriptions of love i think there is. you write well |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Mete* I just wanted you to know that I think the title completes this poem perfectly. |
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