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My Three Day Weekend Family Reunion (as if I'd already been)
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My Three Day Weekend Family Reunion (as if I'd already been) |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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Two car seats and child booster They got up so early to pack By the cockadoodle rooster Crying fighting hissing moaning From four corners of the car And if he hears just one more time The words “Daddy just how far” Daddy likes to speed he does Not afraid of the meany cops How can he make good time he says With blasted gotta pee pit stops And then it rains he’s gotta slow But the kids keep up their singing With the rain pounding hard he hopes No others will see him swinging Thank goodness for Mommies I say For when Daddies lose their cool I don’t know the unspoken words But I do know which one will rule Dumped daddy sits in a puddle Hoping they can hear his roaring One last song as the car wheels off A tune “It’s rain-ing it’s pour-ing” [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 05-12-2000).] |
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bobbycat Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 233USA |
Oh, my....you've got me laughing so hard with this one!  Oh, how you've brought back the memories...especially with those "With the rain pounding hard he hopesNo others will see him swinging" lines! Great work! Christina =^..^= |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Throw yore thumb out there, Walt...surely somebody will take pity on ya! This was a delight and a half...thanks! ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Walt~ Lots of memories came riding back on this one. Many delightful trips with four rug-rats in tow ... singing, games, and the proverbial, 'How many more minutes ?' Loved it .... and you will too ! LOL ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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WolfsMate Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 121New York |
LMAO....I remember being one of those rug rats! Thanks for the smile. "You never have to worry...Never fear for I am near" |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
ahhaha Walt had ten brothers and sisters can we get in squished in your back seat? hehehe "I've been working on the railroad!!! all the live long DAAYYYYAY" LOVE This made me laugh haha peeing, hmm vomiting - and once mom left my older sister in the gas station guess she counted a head twice - LOL netswan |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Here's a secret defense, walt... Don't tell anyone though, OK??? In my family, when the kids said "Are we there yet?"... The standard answer was "Halfway".... whether we'd just left or were about to arrive.. Geesh we spent a lot of time being just "Halfway" to everywhere...  |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
You are so dear Walt...I can see you groaning in the car!!! LOL Hope your weekend goes well...AFTER you get there!!! Take care hun!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
uh oh im leavin in an hour and it mite rain oh the irony |
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