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The Power. . . |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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I have the power To make the sun shine like a diamond I have the power To make the moon hide and the stars glisten I have the power To make the wind whisper my love to you I have the power To make the flowers bloom in your name I have the power To make the rain fall gentle on your skin I have the power To make the thunder and lightning fill the sky with my love I have the power To show you my love in all these ways Yet I choose this power The power of the written word to show you this love ------------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Wow...this is an amazing piece. Gosh,..it's beautiful. Thanks for the read. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
My wish for you is that you have the power to mend your heart, soul and life and share that with the woman you love. Beautiful Sven  At last I have heard the song of enlightenment.... In your heart you can hear it now, if you listen.... It is the song your spirit has been singing since the moment of your birth. All lasting victories are won in the heart.... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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bobbycat Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 233USA |
....and sometimes, the power of the written word is the greatest power of all. Wonderful, empowering poem. Bobbycat =^..^= |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Oh wow! I love powerful romance! I think that self-assurance is one of the most "sexy" traits one can have. This poem definately shows that side of you!  "I have the power..." WOW. Nothing better than a man who knows what he's capable of! "Confidence" is the word I'm looking for! THAT'S it....that's the sexy trait I like!!  This poem rocks in a sensually powerful way. Bravo! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all again. . . your words mean a lot. . . Spitfire, you're welcome. . . Isis, thank you my friend. . . bobbycat, yes, the written word is the most powerful. . . thank you. . . pFF, thank you, I wasn't always this way. . . been a learning process. . . made some mistakes, but hopefully I'm better than I was. . . glad that you can see some of that here. . . *bowing*, thank you again. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I have the power To make the sun shine like a diamond I have the power To make the moon hide and the stars glisten I have the power To make the wind whisper my love to you ------------- I have the power To make the rain fall gentle on your skin I have the power To make the thunder and lightning fill the sky with my love ---------------- Sven... I LOVE THIS POEM!!! IT INDEED DOES ROCK!! IT IS SO COOL!! WOW. this is my fav of yours now...tho its hard to pick... but its so perfect..such sensual images... with the mix of the forces of nature and the power of a mans desire and love. very nice...VERY this one is printing out as I type. later-sven-gator jm It's amazing How you make your face just like a wall How you take your heart and turn it off How I turn my head and you lose it all ... And it's unnerving How one move just puts me by myself There you go just trusting someone else Now I know I put us both through hell ... I'm not sayin That there was nothing wrong I just didn't think you'd ever get tired of me And I'm not sayin We ever had the right to hold on I just didn't wanna let you get away from me. ~MB20~Leave |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
That is some power you have there, Sven. Hoping it is used for good and not evil. Words can be mightier than weapons they say. Whoever this love is, you have it bad for her I think. Great writing.... LW |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Hmmm .. you got it bad arrite! I luv the adoring expressions Keep it going Sven I enjoy the reading! [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 05-13-2000).] |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Sven, How do you keep coming up with all this stuff. This is wonderful! I would have been out of words a LONG time ago..... Are you the energizer bunny in disguise?? You just keep going and going and..... Great Work....Keep it up....and this is Beautiful Sir! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you again. . . Janet, stop it!! You're making me blush here. . . so glad that you like. . . LW, words do have power. . .and I am using mine for good. . . my own. . . Coco, you've got it. . .glad that you enjoy. . . Irie, how do I keep coming up with this? I don't know. . .it just comes and I write it. . . and no, I'm not the Energizer bunny!! LOL Glad that you like. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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