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Tia Junior Member
since 2000-05-05
Posts 41massachusetts |
Can you see it in his eyes? the pain, his lost emotions that never go away? Can you feel it in his touch? his need for love, for happiness... that never seems to come. Can you taste it in his tears the salt, the longing to be understood to be someone... Can you feel it? do you want to feel it? the endless pain, that burns in his heart... I'd rather have someone hate me for who i am,than to have someone like me for who i'm pretending to be |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~My reply is a two fold...First I'd like to say that your poem spoke to me more than most do. I mean this. I felt it,..it's like something I've seen before. Second,...uuummm, your signature thingy there...well...KIX!!! I love it,...it's great.  |
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Tom26 Junior Member
since 2000-05-07
Posts 30 |
Tia- Reading this poem was kinda of creepy. I felt as if you were talking about me and what I've felt for near four years now. You're a very talented poet indeed. -Tom To know you can't have something makes it that much more desirable. |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
This is very Moving..I l like it.....And welcome to passions....This is the first I have seen of your work and look forward to seeing more A man does not love a woman because she is beautiful...But she is beautiful because he loves her. |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
This is very haunting and poignant and sad. I know these feelings much too well. Good poem with a deep message. |
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Nagroc New Member
since 2000-05-09
Posts 4 |
I love this poem...it's everything I've always wanted to say but what I keep hidden and what I could never write down. Keep up the good work! |
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