This was written for any occasion but I think Mother's day fit's it

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Jeffrey Carter

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since 2000-04-08

Posts 2367
State of constant confusion!

0 posted 2000-05-09 05:47 PM

Though I may not always show it
It will always remain true
There could never be a better gift
Than to have a friend like you

All my love,
Jeffrey

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I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep

[This message has been edited by Jeffrey Carter (edited 05-09-2000).]

poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25

Posts 2646
Arkansas

1 posted 2000-05-09 06:57 PM

Hey Jeffrey! I've always thought of how I'd like to work for Hallmark or someone like that too! That is so neat - and hey, this is definately sweet material for a card! With so many out there, I think I would struggle though to come up with fresh lines, you know? Let me know how it goes, if you persue this. Maybe you could then convince me to take the same route!

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

2 posted 2000-05-09 07:13 PM

So fitting...nice work

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2000-05-09 07:17 PM

Very nice, Jeffrey.
Nothing as true as a friend ...
nothing as true as the love of and
for a mother.

A wonderful piece.
Love ya'
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

netswan
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since 2000-03-28

Posts 1369
Washington

4 posted 2000-05-09 07:36 PM

Short and Sweet -- Jeffrey --
LOL Femme Fatal  ----writing cards
for hallmark???

with all the talent in here we could
all be Passions Card's  ----who
wants to work for others?  LOL

I always think big ----!!!

well done Jeff

netswan

Marina
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since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

5 posted 2000-05-09 09:17 PM

Oh Jeffery this was so sweet of you to write about me... Pardon? ( Marina looking foolish) Pardon? Ehm....I knew that.
But I still liked it.

Marina

Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

6 posted 2000-05-09 10:21 PM

Refreshing to fall upon such a gentle
well done poem
Thanks for posting it

Rex}>{{{{o>

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

7 posted 2000-05-09 10:25 PM

Jeff--

as always you write straight from the heart. beautiful m'dear!!

amy

~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

Tia
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since 2000-05-05

Posts 41
massachusetts

8 posted 2000-05-09 10:43 PM

that was short, but very cute...
hope to see more.

Tia

I'd rather have someone hate me for who i am,than to have someone like me for who i'm pretending to be

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

9 posted 2000-05-09 11:07 PM

Jeffrey,
Very sweet as always!! Great work, my friend!!

LW

Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

Elizabeth

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since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

10 posted 2000-07-28 09:23 PM

Short and sweet are the words to describe this.

Elizabeth

Why ME???

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