Open Poetry #7 |
This was written for any occasion but I think Mother's day fit's it |
Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Though I may not always show it < !signature-->It will always remain true There could never be a better gift Than to have a friend like you All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep [This message has been edited by Jeffrey Carter (edited 05-09-2000).] |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Hey Jeffrey! I've always thought of how I'd like to work for Hallmark or someone like that too! That is so neat - and hey, this is definately sweet material for a card! With so many out there, I think I would struggle though to come up with fresh lines, you know? Let me know how it goes, if you persue this. Maybe you could then convince me to take the same route! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
So fitting...nice work |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Very nice, Jeffrey. Nothing as true as a friend ... nothing as true as the love of and for a mother. A wonderful piece. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Short and Sweet -- Jeffrey -- LOL Femme Fatal ----writing cards for hallmark??? with all the talent in here we could all be Passions Card's ----who wants to work for others? LOL I always think big ----!!! well done Jeff netswan |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Oh Jeffery this was so sweet of you to write about me... Pardon? ( Marina looking foolish) Pardon? Ehm....I knew that. But I still liked it. Marina |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Refreshing to fall upon such a gentle well done poem Thanks for posting it Rex}>{{{{o> |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Jeff-- as always you write straight from the heart. beautiful m'dear!! amy ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Tia Junior Member
since 2000-05-05
Posts 41massachusetts |
that was short, but very cute... hope to see more. Tia I'd rather have someone hate me for who i am,than to have someone like me for who i'm pretending to be |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Jeffrey, Very sweet as always!! Great work, my friend!! LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Short and sweet are the words to describe this. Elizabeth Why ME??? |
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