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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Forever And Ever And Ever ~*Marge Tindal*~ For just a little longer For just a little more One chance to be with you One chance to open love's door For the simple little pleasures For the quiet solace of your love Gathering the everlasting peace Gathering the visions from above For love for the sake of loving For love in the form of you Love in love with love Love in everything you do For caring and sharing For caring about me Caring about my heart Caring where I'd be For all the years you've loved me For all the memories we've shared Cherishing all the love we've made Cherishing all the times you've cared I will love you Forever and ever and ever and maybe a little longer ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
The gentle understanding and quietness shared in a long, mature romance is so uplifting and heartening. You've stated this beautifully Marge. This line made me sigh "For the quiet solace of your love". Take care, and thank you again for your wonderful comments to "Drifting" ... Much appreciation, /Kit |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
I am in total agreement with Kit, Marge...the dedication of a lifetime love has a quality like no other. This one made me teary...and that is good! "For love in the form of you" ...how poignant, this. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kit~ For all the enjoyment of the excitement that loves brings us ... there is a beautiful quality in the serenity and comfort we find in those dedicated loves. Thank you always for sharing such thoughtful responses. I greatly enjoyed your 'Drifting' thoughts. Claire~ Sometimes it seems that 'lifetimes' are so short that we need to flood them with all the love we can. I know you are very much aware of these feelings. Teary-eyed is a good thing, I agree. Smiling with the memories is also good. Smile, my friend. I'm so glad to touch your inner spirit with my thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Your writings overflow with the love in your heart, Marge! This is lovely! Denise |
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Dolphins3 Member
since 1999-09-30
Posts 135Wisconsin |
Wow Marge I really loved this poem. Thanks for sharing it with us.  |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Love can't get much sweeter than this dearest!!! *Forever and ever...amen* (know that song?) Loved this!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Wonderful, Marge....I love this one! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Marge~ I love it! Ilove it! I love it! With All my heart (and a little more!) You are wonderful! Love Ya~ ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
This is the poem that should go on a card...such a personal poem, but yet universal in appeal. Beautiful! |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Marge, you are such a romantic! Bet you have never heard that before. If you continue writing this well you are bound to become an excellent poet (teasing) Will have to give you a "10" for this one. Actually I don't believe I have given you anything less on anything you've written! How's that for perfection!! Cheers! dh A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ I am blessed with much love. Thank you for letting me know it's evident. Dolphin~ Thank you for liking. Devina~ I do know that song and it so sweetly sings in my life. Love ya' ESP~ Hi gal - so pleased you like. TerryW~ With all my heart and a little more, I appreciate you greatly. Martie~ You should have received your e-card by now ... hee - hee ! Love ya'. DannyH~ Guilty as charged ! I don't claim perfection ... but with a 10 ... it's close huh? (I'm blonde too !  )Love to all for your wonderful enthusiasm on this piece. You just kind of make my day ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Marge, isn't love wonderful, especially when you realize there is a lot more to it than animal passion (though I don't knock the animal passion part...not me...nope). But it's such a wonderful feeling to love, and receive love and know it for what it is, as you obviously do. Very beautiful. j. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Enjoyed your poem very much!!!!!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JWesley~ Yes. Thank you. VanDana~ Thank you my friend. So nice to know you're in here reading and posting. Love ya' ~*Marge*~< !signature--> ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 05-09-2000).] |
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lorilockheart Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 206Alabama |
This is so beautiful, so heartfelt, and so touching. Lori ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance. song by LeeAnn Womack ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
There you go again, Marge, expressing my love for my husband better than I can! But what a gift! I get to show it to him, and tell him that it is exactly how I feel! Thank you! |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Love is truly a wonderful thing Marge, and nobody could have said it better. Marina |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lori~ Thank you so very much. Rosemary~ Just the thought of you sharing my words with Dale, sets my heart aglow. What a wonderful compliment, my friend. My heart thanks you. Marina~ Thank you. Oh, it is wonderful and I hope it's said by hearts all over the world everyday. Thanks, all. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
This drips with love and sweetness....but could expect no less with you Marge.... A man does not love a woman because she is beautiful...But she is beautiful because he loves her. |
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Brandyn Sand Member
since 2000-04-21
Posts 82Columbia, SC |
What a precious message to someone who has obviously stolen your heart. Beautiful words. *S* Your subject is indeed fortunate. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
tiz sooo sweet yuh |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh Marge this was so dreamy I do so love your talent YOUR THE BEST hugs tracie~Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
This was just as good as the last one Marge. . .it would seemt that the Romantics have taken over for a while!! Wonderful poem and that song that Devina mentioned automatically came up in my mind before I even saw this one!!! You should find it and listen to it!!! Excellent my romantic friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
David~ Well, I can promise that I'll try not to disappoint you. Brandyn~ Thank you for the kind comments. Yep .. love is something special for sure. Walt~ Thank you, my friend. Tracie~ Awwwww ! I love you, my friend. Sven~ The song is a favorite of mine. Yes, the 'romantics' are here to keep you company. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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