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REBECCA ALLYN Member
since 2000-05-09
Posts 91Lima,Ohio |
Empower yourself over me Tell me what it is I have to be put me in my place and make me do as you say Tell me everything has to be your way push me around and tell me how to feel make me cry then tell me it's no big deal Lie to me time and time again cheat on me and make me think it's my sin Believe that you are everything and I am nothing break me down and make me feel something Promise to be ever faithful and true please don't tell me eyes are beautiful come up with something new Smack me around and show me you're a man make me fall in love with you and forget about my plan Let me trust you fully,let me love you wholly just give me a reason to be with you and I promise to make you fall too |
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lorilockheart Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 206Alabama |
Yes, it's me again... powerful, deep, emotional, intense.............. You're good. Lori ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance. song by LeeAnn Womack ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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REBECCA ALLYN Member
since 2000-05-09
Posts 91Lima,Ohio |
Lori, Thank you so much you are too kind!!! Lots Of Love, Becky |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Becky, I normally wouldn't respond to a poem such as this because of its masochistic nature. I do feel compelled to tell you that I hope this is a hypothetical situation for you... if not, you'll be setting yourself up for some rather intensive and potentially dangerous life situations... |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Becky, I just replied to another poem of yours...this one disturbs me...I do hope this is not your life you are describing! You are a worthy person and should not remain in this kind of relationship...  |
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REBECCA ALLYN Member
since 2000-05-09
Posts 91Lima,Ohio |
I want every one to understand that I do love myself and I am not in a bad relationship. I just have to write what ever comes out of my head or I will go nuts!! Do you guys understand? |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Firstly, I think most of us here understand.  Secondly this is indeed an intense piece of work. Keep writing!< !signature-->Not all those who wander are lost. ~J.R.R. Tolkien [This message has been edited by EagleOne (edited 05-10-2000).] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thanks for clearing it up Becky.... |
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