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It Touched Me
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It Touched Me |
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Brandyn Sand Member
since 2000-04-21
Posts 82Columbia, SC 
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It touched me With its words, Penetrating the deepest confines of my soul, And ignited a fire within me - One that burned ever so slightly out of control. Its warmth blanketed my body, Enveloped me within its strong and massive arms. I held on to it tightly though it manifested no form, And I stayed there but for a time... And time stood still. It touched me with its words, and it... was you. © Brandyn Sand revised 11-99 |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
***brandyn, this poem left me with a lump in my throat and a tear in my eye. i hope you dont mind me printing this ne off...it's a kepper! well done and thankyou for providing me with such an insight into your heart and soul. I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
***brandyn, this poem left me with a lump in my throat and a tear in my eye. i hope you dont mind me printing this ne off...it's a keeper! well done and thankyou for providing me with such an insight into your heart and soul. I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Such a sweet poem hun...I'm glad to see your stars shining brightly!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Oh, Brandyn, this is absolutely breathtakingly beautiful! WOW! Denise |
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lorilockheart Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 206Alabama |
Brandyn, This "touched me" too. I guess I react strongest to words that I can easily relate to, and that's what these words have done to me. Very powerful. Lori ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance. song by LeeAnn Womack ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Beautiful work, Brandyn. On should relish it when "time stands still" for them... sound like you did. Michael |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Brandyn, such greatness in expression left me feel the same as METE I conquer ~ this one is a keeper ~ CocoBaci |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
--Brandyn This was absolutely breathtaking. I liked how you built the poem around on how you feel and then revealed the reason why. both creative and beautiful. wonderful! take care, amy  ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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