»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #7
»
I Love You...from [email protected]....(virus attached)
| Open Poetry #7 |
|
I Love You...from [email protected]....(virus attached) |
|
|
wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
|
Would it most likely make you mad < !signature-->If I made light of the day you’ve had Would it make you good and o’nery If I said it smooth like ole Sean Connery But since the words they so often fail I’ve sent it here in attached e-mail I’ve tried to be the romantic poet But in words it’s hard to let you know it So I wired ten grand off to E-Bay They’ll let you buy what e’er you say Merlin Olsen is at your door A dozen roses and many more The desires you wish on the net A click and I’ll happily get Don’t wait too long if you love me My cards are maxed and nothing’s free I love the net and don’t watch the time I bought you plenty here in rhyme But I love you I do I really do! With all that’s good and all that’s true But I see this e-mail’s not been read So I must move on this I dread Been putting I Love You’s in the trash I think I’ll read them….(((((Computer Crash))))) The doctor said, "You're almost dead. Don't eat green bananas no more." The sick little monkey groaned and said, "But that's what I 1-2 the 3-4." from The Monkey--Shel Silverstein [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 05-04-2000).] |
||
| © Copyright 2000 Walt Burns - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
LOL WayoutWalt. Had to open your poem to see what it is like to be loved by you ----) Cute ------ netswan |
||
|
Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
hehe, Excellent work walt, I doubt many could have so skillfully incorporated the latest virus into a poem so sweet  |
||
|
Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
ROFL!!! I heard about this virus...this poem is too cute!!! Heheheheehe...WoW, you always have a odd way with words and thoughts...yet another reason why I love to read your stuff.  Alicat |
||
|
wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
hehehe yuh The doctor said, "You're almost dead. Don't eat green bananas no more." The sick little monkey groaned and said, "But that's what I 1-2 the 3-4." from The Monkey--Shel Silverstein |
||
|
Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
LOL, you've got great talent, Walt! Yep, this made sense to me, and was excellent! I enjoyed it a lot. *Krista Knutson* "Lonliness is the human condition." *Mark Twain, in the book "The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn"* |
||
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Walt! DUDE!! You're killing me here man!! This is great!! I know that I can always count on you to give me a laugh!! Great poem!! ------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
||
|
Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
LOL.....this is not funny!!!! LOL..ok it is!! LOL |
||
|
wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
and now there's another virus here is a joke for you from (insert friendly person here) dont open it!! |
||
|
Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I DIDN'T OPEN THIS - I DIDN'T - IT JUST SORT OF OPENED ITSELF - YEP THAT'S IT - IT OPENED ITSELF!!!...  |
||
|
wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
no one has sent any i love you's to me sniff |
||
|
X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
Oh My god Walt! I saw that email from you in my box and I never opened it! *sigh* ahh well such is life *smiles* this was GREAT! (said like Tony the T!) ~X~ |
||
|
PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
This is so funny! Thanks for the laugh. No one sent me any I love you's either, but in this case I considered myself lucky. Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream. Shawna R. Holder Boise, Idaho |
||
|
devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This was more than just right on Walt...can I say I love you??? G* Sad but true...for the first time I'm hoping not to see it in my mailbox!!!! Very creative dearie!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
||
|
wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thank yuh yuh i am loved sigh |
||
|
WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Woohoo! The I love you virus! Way to go Walt! Never would have thought of something like this! Fantastico dude |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
