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Dream's Recollection |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida 
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How easy is it for me to recall The touch of your velveteen lips Which brightened life’s dreary pall In wonderfully delicate sips How easy is it for me to burn Your lover’s touch ignited my skin While each secret duly learn’d For each found in one, again How eas’ly found for me to cry Tears of a forgotten delicacy Relief shined a’glinted eye Enwrapped in a dream eternally How eas’ly found for me to live To feel the warmth of your smile Privy to the tender look you give In your own endearing style How easily am I to dream Such things dear, and much more Of you and I in life’s great scheme And all there is for us in store May I never be too busy to help another's load, Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed. --Author Unknown |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
How easy it is for me to see how much you've improved. Very well written, Satiate, with a wonderfully inspiring, romantical message.  Alicat  |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
That was a beautiful poem, with a very lovely message.  I enjoyed it very much!!!"Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying." Harry Anderson, "Night Court" *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
This was well constructed Kamla. I very much enjoyed reading it. I can very much relate to the message here as well. Excellent (applause). When you are old and grey and full of sleep, And nodding by the fire, take down this book, And slowly read, and dream of the soft look Your eyes had once, and of their shodows deep; How many loved your moments of glad grace, And loved your beauty with love false or true, But one man loved the pilgrim soul in you, And loved the sorrows of your changing face... William Butler Yeats |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Satiate~ This is endearing. I enjoyed the flow of thoughts. 'How eas’ly found for me to live To feel the warmth of your smile Privy to the tender look you give In your own endearing style' Nicely rendered sentiments. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Excellent Satiate...I can feel the warmth and the thoughts of love coming from this poem. . . you have done very well. . .truly a very romantic poem. . . ---------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
~~simply said, this is very nice, with such a delicate touch and hopeful message~~ dh A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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